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Review #1, by HP_Luvr No Sympathy, Plenty of Sarcasm

15th June 2010:
Ok, so I just found this story and so far i really enjoy it! At first I didn't really like how Claire's POV was at the beginning of each chapter, but now after reading more, I think its necessary. Ace seems to be getting kind of moody, which im not sure I like, but I think it's just because of her friends.
Your writing style is kinda choppy from one chapter to the next, but the chapters themselves are brilliant.
Overall, keep updating pretty please!! :)

Author's Response: yeah, i really think Claire's POV adds a lot to the story...and don't worry! Ace is about to have a very rude awakening! my writing style is something i need to work on, but hopefully i am learning! thanks for the review!!!

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Review #2, by MistressOfMarauders The Beginning

14th June 2010:
You are a fantastic writer, one of my favorites on the site. I loved how you included "Cedric Chang" (a bittersweet name), and the OC narrative worked very well.
I look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: thank you so much for that compliment (i am jumping for joy right now)!
and i really love Ace, she's a lot like me...


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Review #3, by hushpuppy A Helping Hand

12th June 2010:
I can't really lie here, I hate that you had Ace defend Scorpius when only a few chapters ago he tried to blackmail her with one of her darkest secrets. You described him as being loathsome and after a few minutes he's now good? What's next, Bex is good too even though you've shown she's bit of a witch?

Author's Response: of course Malfoy isn't a good person, but neither is James for thinking that all Slytherins are evil. Ace isn't some one who thinks that way, since she knows what it's like to be singled out and tormented. Malfoy isn't the greatest person ever, but neither is James, Albus, Becca or even Ace. Everyone has choices to make in the story, and Ace's choice at the moment was to help Scorpius. I sort of look at Scorpius and Ace's relationship like I view Lily and Severus (loosely!); Ace wants to see the good in Scorpius, because he is her best friend's (however mad she might be at Rose) boyfriend, and pities him to some extent in the situation. James is incredibly like his grandfather, and only sees the evil mass that is Slytherin house. It doesn't mean that Malfoy will not continue to be horrible, because he is A LOT like his father. hope this answers your questions!

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Review #4, by sarlizbby A Rush of Emotions

2nd June 2010:
Oooh! I think someone has a little crush on Albus! Haha :). This story seriously cracks me up! I love the ending of this chapter: "James came in and stunned Malfoy. Awesome.". Hahahah

Author's Response: haha thanks so much for the review! Yeah, she can't help it...

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Review #5, by Missoni005 A Rush of Emotions

23rd May 2010:
I really like this story and think you should continue writing it.

Author's Response: don't worry, i plan to! thanks for the review!

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Review #6, by Meg A Rush of Emotions

23rd May 2010:
I am liking this story so far. My guess is Alice is the werewolf. I am really interested in the back story, of her mother and such. looking forward to more!

Author's Response: thanks! and you shall see.

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Review #7, by kill the moonlight The Beginning

2nd May 2010:
Ouuu! your title is from Mgmt isn't it? Brilliant song.
"love must be forgotten, life can always start up anew."

Author's Response: yeah it is! i love them!

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Review #8, by Rowdy18 You've Got a Friend in Me

23rd April 2010:
I'm glad that she told James! I'm beginning to really like him in this story. More soon please!

Author's Response: will do! and i am so happy with the way james turned out...he's turning into a sweetie! thanks for the review!

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Review #9, by hushpuppy You've Got a Friend in Me

16th April 2010:
I'm nervous about Al and why James didn't want Ace to get his broom. Was he doing the Devil's Child in his room or did find out about her being a werewolf and take it badly? James seems much cooler in any event but I don't want Ace's heart broken any more by her friends' stupidity...

Author's Response: don't worry! you shall find out why (although it's not very pleasant...)

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Review #10, by KRedden Voldeteen

13th April 2010:
I really like how you include a flash back at the beginning of every chapter.
Keep it going, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: thanks so much! i really like the flashbacks too!! :)

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Review #11, by Rowdy18 Voldeteen

12th April 2010:
ohh! Is she gonna spill her secrets to James?? I love this story!! More soon please!!

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Review #12, by Violet Potter Voldeteen

10th April 2010:
Ooooh! I'm glad she finally confided in someone, especially it being James!
Also I'm glad Ace threw up on She-Voldy, she's such a bitch.
Can't wait to read on, seriously good plot.

Author's Response: i know, i hate She-Voldemort! haha thanks so much!

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Review #13, by hushpuppy Voldeteen

10th April 2010:
Good! I'm glad that Ace is going to talk to someone about whatever is on her mind.

Does Ace get bitten by a werewolf when her mom's out on the town with Alice? Guess I'll have to wait to find out, right?

Author's Response: yep, you will! thanks so much for the review!!

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Review #14, by KatterinaQ Voldeteen

10th April 2010:
Hahahah. Great stuff. Can't wait to see if she really tells James.

Author's Response: haha thanks! and the next chapter is on its way!

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Review #15, by Violet Potter Coverups

5th April 2010:
Ohh, I like it!
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Keep it up, it's really good :)

Author's Response: thanks so much! i will!

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Review #16, by lily16 Coverups

4th April 2010:
I'm so glad Ace stoop up for herself. What Rose did was completly uncalled for. And Scorpius deserved to be punched anyway.

I hope Ace starts making new friends...I still can't get over what Rose did :/

I really love your writing, though, And the parts at the begining of the chapters are really interesting :)

Author's Response: thanks so much for all these reviews! they make me feel special...:)

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Review #17, by lily16 Discovered?

4th April 2010:
Gasp! Scorpius knows? This should be interesting :D

And I love the Al/Ace hints you out in this chapter! If you even put them there at all...maybe I'm reading too much into it.

Author's Response: oh aren't reading too much into it...not giving anything away...
thanks for the reviews!!!

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Review #18, by lily16 Look, I'm not in Denial! I'm Smiling!

4th April 2010:
I love the idea of a special room for werewolves; that seems like something that would be built after the war.

I hope Ace tells her friends soon though...they're Weasleys and Potters! Being understanding runs in their blood :)
But I can sort of understand why she doesn't.

And I love Albus! Only real men can skip in public :D

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Review #19, by lily16 The Prologue

4th April 2010:
This is getting so good! You're a really good story teller :D

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Review #20, by lily16 The Beginning

4th April 2010:
Oh, so she's a werewolf? Maybe?
I really like this story so far! Rose, Al, and Ace have a great connection. And I REALLY loved the begining, with the story about Ace's mom. It gave us a lot of information about her without getting boring or becoming too overbearing

I'm soo glad there are six more chapters to read :D

Author's Response: thank you! yes, i love writing Ace's mom since she is so different than Ace.

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Review #21, by dyqw1700 Coverups

3rd April 2010:
This chapter was so good and I feel bad for Ace! Please update soon?

Author's Response: i will! thanks for reading/reviewing! :)

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Review #22, by marciabarcia Coverups

3rd April 2010:
Great Job!


Author's Response: haha thanks so much for these adorable reviews! more to come!

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Review #23, by marciabarcia Awkward Turtle

3rd April 2010:
Oh gosh... that is awkward...


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Review #24, by marciabarcia Just Punchy

3rd April 2010:
Omg! Why would Rose do that!


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Review #25, by amy Awkward Turtle

31st March 2010:
that the reason scorpius wants albus to like he,s related to rose

Author's Response: yes! Thanks so much for these reviews!! :)

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