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Review #1, by Iellwen My one and only chapter

11th July 2014:
Reviewing for the House Cup 2014!

You have a few typos here and there as well as some spacing issue :/ But nothing major and I managed to understand it all pretty well, not being English and all ;) For example: 'monstasity' I understood 'monstrosity' or 'jelious' as 'jealous', etc... As far as I'm concerned, one or two typos aren't that big a deal... But when it's one almost every ten word, I have to wonder; how fast did you type this? Hehe ^^

It's very interesting that you chose Hermione to have nightmares about falling endlessly down, when one stops to consider the [modern?] interpretation of the dream. Falling down supposedly holds, among other meanings, the signification of little self-confidence and fears in general (yeah, that's a silly interpretation, I agree^^) and I've read somewhere it also held the meaning of disappointment/feeling betrayed.
So that nightmare definitely fits in your Hermione's thought pattern :)

It's been a while since I've read a Hermione/Harry shipping, so that was somewhat refreshing :D (I was actually looking for Bellatrix action^^)
I wonder who HE/HIM was? Voldemort? 'Long and disgusting fingernails' could also mean Greyback?

Anyway! T'was an interesting read!! :D

*Gee

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Review #2, by Littlemissmb My one and only chapter

22nd April 2012:
Ignoring the spelling and grammar, i really loved this story, i love the tortured soul side of it. 9/10

Author's Response: This summer I plan of revising my stories! I wrote this in s courtroom (During a competition not an actual trial!!) So, I sadly did not give it the attention it needed as far as grammar and spelling goes! Thank you so much for your review though! Im glad you liked my darker version of Hermione!

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Review #3, by HP0247 My one and only chapter

25th April 2011:
That was disturbing, didn't enjoy it much because it's so dark. This review is about my personal taste and limits and is not a reflection on your ability to tell a story.

Thank you.

Author's Response: I know that my writing style for this particular story was a little dark. I'm sorry it wasn't for your taste but I promise that I will write some cherry one-shots very soon! and thank you for!!! :)reviewing

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Review #4, by Aidenk77 My one and only chapter

22nd May 2010:
Short, sharp and bleak. I hope she does get her happy ending.

Author's Response: hehe1 maybe a sequel might be in order... because no one dose know as well as I do that this is a very dark fic. and thank you so much for reviewing!

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Review #5, by American Ginny My one and only chapter

14th November 2009:
:'( THAT'S SO SAD! *sniff* *sniff* poor hermione poor hermione...

Author's Response: don't worry!!! she will find her happy ending soon :)

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Review #6, by HermionesPimp My one and only chapter

6th November 2009:
hey i like it! very dark, and has good detail.its kinda short tho! maybe u could rite a sequel?

Author's Response: I LOVE GETTING REVIEWS!!! there will be a sequel. I'm just working on an idea... if you have any suggestions please tell me :)I'm really into writing one-shots at the moment so i can guarantee that I will use at-least one suggestions in a story. :D

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