Ignoring the spelling and grammar, i really loved this story, i love the tortured soul side of it. 9/10

Author's Response: This summer I plan of revising my stories! I wrote this in s courtroom (During a competition not an actual trial!!) So, I sadly did not give it the attention it needed as far as grammar and spelling goes! Thank you so much for your review though! Im glad you liked my darker version of Hermione!

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That was disturbing, didn't enjoy it much because it's so dark. This review is about my personal taste and limits and is not a reflection on your ability to tell a story.

Thank you.

Author's Response: I know that my writing style for this particular story was a little dark. I'm sorry it wasn't for your taste but I promise that I will write some cherry one-shots very soon! and thank you for!!! :)reviewing

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Short, sharp and bleak. I hope she does get her happy ending.

Author's Response: hehe1 maybe a sequel might be in order... because no one dose know as well as I do that this is a very dark fic. and thank you so much for reviewing!

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:'( THAT'S SO SAD! *sniff* *sniff* poor hermione poor hermione...

Author's Response: don't worry!!! she will find her happy ending soon :)

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hey i like it! very dark, and has good detail.its kinda short tho! maybe u could rite a sequel?

Author's Response: I LOVE GETTING REVIEWS!!! there will be a sequel. I'm just working on an idea... if you have any suggestions please tell me :)I'm really into writing one-shots at the moment so i can guarantee that I will use at-least one suggestions in a story. :D

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