7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Catelynn Early Love and a Girl Named Vera

17th May 2010:
This is an interesting concept! but just as a suggestion, you spelled "enemies" wrong in your summary. Readers like to see correct spelling in summaries. I like this:)

Author's Response: Thank for the review! And thanks for the correction! :) I'm glad you liked it

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Review #2, by WeasleyGirl03 My Arrival to Hogwarts. Hogwarts? Who came up with that?

17th December 2009:
Ha ha I always thought Hogwarts was a weird name!!!

Loved this chapter!

Author's Response: I know right. I mean Hogwarts? I just was wondering that when I wrote this chapter so I thought that I'd put that in there. Glad you liked it! :)

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Review #3, by Zoe Lovegood Veralidiane Gretchen Frenzied. Hey I didn't choose the name.

26th November 2009:
I enjoy this chapter. I am quite proud of myself. Can't for my next one where she meets Harry, Ron and Hermione! Keep checking for when the next one come out! :) Thanks to all my readers! Any tips or ideas will gladly be taken!

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Review #4, by Amy Veralidiane Gretchen Frenzied. Hey I didn't choose the name.

14th November 2009:
i love it very nice:]

Author's Response: Thanks glad you like it. :)

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Review #5, by Amy Veralidiane Gretchen Frenzied. Hey I didn't choose the name.

14th November 2009:
i love it very nice:]

Author's Response: Thanks glad you like it. :)

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Review #6, by nobody Veralidiane Gretchen Frenzied. Hey I didn't choose the name.

13th November 2009:
omg i have goose bumps idk why but i think this story may become epic?!?!

Author's Response: Well you'll just to see now won't you? Well don't worry you have to remember every person she ever knew hated her. She get's calmer when she is with friends.

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Review #7, by WeasleyGirl03 Veralidiane Gretchen Frenzied. Hey I didn't choose the name.

13th November 2009:
Whoa Vera has power LOTS of power!

I like how her situation is very similar to Harry's right at the start :)
But the bit where Vera shouts in block capitals needs to be on a seperate line to her "mum"'s speak, ok? Positive critisism n all that? :D

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it. Yeah she has more power than she thinks. Let's just say most people don't like her to lose her temper. :) Thanks for the tips. New chapter coming soon!

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