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16 Reviews Found

Review #1, by JLandDHforever The Baby

23rd May 2010:
WAIT. HERMIONE DIED?! :O

I *so* didn't see that. @-)

Nicely written, though, and I love the first four fluffy (yay for alliteration) chapters. This one? I'm still deciding. I'm still quite shocked at Hermione's death. Wow.

Author's Response: I'm sorry for the late response! I swear to whatever/whoever I believe in that I replied ages ago.

Anyway, yes Hermione died!! I had a completely fluffy end planned out but when I came to write the chapter, this is what came out. I tried to change it but nothing seemed good enough so I just left it!

Regardless of this chapter I'm glad you liked the first four fluffy chapters!!

Thanks for reviewing!


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Review #2, by City Lights The Baby

28th February 2010:
You had Hermione die??? Why?

Author's Response: argh don't hate me! I wanted their relationship to come to a full circle from start to finish! I actually planned the chapter to be the two of them holding hands whilst they taught their child how to walk but when i sat down to write the chapter this is what came out! who am I to argue? I hoped you still liked it though!

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Review #3, by brennuhh Hand- Held

28th February 2010:
i really really liked this chapter, it was very...eerie. for lack of a better word. kudos, it rocked (:

Author's Response: Thank You!! I don't think I've ever had someone tell me my chapter rocked before (I'll have to goi back and check) so thanks for that too!! Next chapter should be up in under three days!!

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Review #4, by cassy123 The Baby

27th February 2010:
a very good story. i like it a lot.
i´m a little teary that hermione died after giving birth. but draco is not alone. he has their little daughter. and hermione will be always with them.
cassy

Author's Response: Thank You for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it!

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Review #5, by ischky The Baby

27th February 2010:
Did Hermione die? :o Please say she didn't! :o :(

Author's Response: I'm afraid she did! Argh don't hate me! I'm sorry!! ooh I don't know what else to say! I wanted to make Draco and Hermione's relationship come to a finish.

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Review #6, by laurajane81 The Baby

27th February 2010:
Oh my god, did hermione die? No! However, this shows how good a writer you are, by bringing the complete which element to it. Well done x

Author's Response: Thank You! I was hoping that people would see past the whole you killed Hermione! to the part about bringing their relationship to a finish! Thank you for reading!

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Review #7, by DramioneFan4Eva The Wedding

24th February 2010:
Awh(:
That was the cutest thing Ever:P
I loved it!
Especially the 'He's saying hello' bit(:
Great work.
-Emma XxOx

Author's Response: Thank You! Just one more chapter to go!

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Review #8, by annella_grace The Wedding

24th February 2010:
um i love these so much ok cant wait for the last chpt. im now going to go read your other story...^_^

Author's Response: Haha Thank you!

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Review #9, by DramioneFan4Eva The fifth date

27th January 2010:
Aw, that was seriously cute!!
Well written and enough descriptives to give the reader a clear picture!!
Awesome job xDD
-Emma XxOx

Author's Response: Thank You!!

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Review #10, by allergictopink The fifth date

27th January 2010:
this short story is really cute, its refreshingly short (haha, i usually love long chapters though) and well written. great job, looking forwad to the last two chapters!

Author's Response: Thank You!! I like long chapters too but for this story I wanted it short and sweet! Hope the next two chapters live up to your expectations!!

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Review #11, by AussieAnatomy627 The anniversary

6th January 2010:
Aww that was so sweet. I loved getting into Hermione's head and I'm glad Ron and Lavender are happy too.

Author's Response: oooh two reviews! I feel special!! haha! I normally hate Ron with a passion but for some reason I wanted to give him a happy ever after too! Hope you like the next chapter too!

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Review #12, by AussieAnatomy627 Hand- Held

6th January 2010:
That was awesome. I loved the way you wrote this and seeing how different people dealt with what happened.

Author's Response: Thank You!! I'm really glad you liked it!

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Review #13, by DramioneFan4Eva The anniversary

6th January 2010:
Aw, that's so sweet!
You portrayed her love for him perfectly hun:)
Update sooon!
-Emma XxOx

Author's Response: Thank You!! I promise I will update soon!!

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Review #14, by candyflosseater The anniversary

5th January 2010:
Pretty cool, I like it.. could improve but over all.. very good.
9/10
please R n R MINE! :D

Author's Response: Thank You!! I'll check out your story once I finish my dreaded exams! xx

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Review #15, by AzrososWinster Hand- Held

15th November 2009:
It's beatiful already, not at all boring like so many first chapters are. Brilliant job. (:

Author's Response: Thank you! hope you enjoy the rest too! xx

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Review #16, by DramioneFan4Eva Hand- Held

13th November 2009:
Aww this is sad and sweet at the same time:} (in a good way though I think) Of course the kiss was a mistake! Ron seems like a violent person. And poor little Dennis Creevey:( What did Professor Sinstra say to Hermione? It seemed to shock her. And her and Draco. . . well my penname really tells you what I think about that;)
-Emma xx

Author's Response: You're the first reviewer I have for Hand-Held! Thank You so much for taking the time to tell me what you thought! It means the world to me! I totally agree with you about Ron. I really can't believe that Hermione marries him of all people! It's so wrong that I'm actually pretending the epilogue of Deathly Hallows just doesn't exist! Professor Sinistra was crying over the death of the love of her life, one Professor Snape (I didn't include it in the story because I wasn't sure how well recieved it would be) I put the next chapter up for validation yesterday and the queue is 5 days long so it should be up by Tuesday latest! I look forward to hearing what you think about the next chapter! xx

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