Oh my God, oh my God, oh my God, I haven't read this is MONTHS and it's STILL just as amazing as the last time. But it still only has two chapters :( that's sad. I need more please :D!!!
10/10Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm actually trying to figure out what to have happen in the next chapter -- my friend DarkLadyofSlytherin (do read her work; it's fantastic!) has been pushing me to update. So hopefully soon!
Thank you for the kind review. :)
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Kali, as always, your writing moves me. And worse yet, you've piqued my interest and I want to read more. The fact that I'm at all reading a dramione is quite frightening. Moreover, that I like what I've read is scary! There isn't much else I can say than, "lord help me!" since I love what I've read thus far. Of course, you are amazing with your way with words, and I envy such talent.
I'm looking forward to jumping on in to the next chapter and finding out what the devil Draco is doing there. Report Review
wow this is really good. a little creepy but that's murder for you. i reckon it's going to be Gerry. just a hunch but i'm never good at guessing murder games so i don't know. but it's really good.
shame there's not more chapters I'm really interesting in finding out the rest.Author's Response: Gerry! LOL! That's a theory I haven't heard before! ;) I'm so pleased you like it! More chapters are coming, never fear. ^^ Thank you very much for your review! XOXO, Kalina Report Review
good start to the story. sometimes i find that if the bits in between the speaking on a fan fic are boring i skip them. but your fan fic was not boring. the opposite actually. really well done.
8/10Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it! :) I really appreciate your review. :) XOXO, Kalina Report Review
Wicked chapter. The characters are well done and I like the way you describe things. I especially like how we're starting to see the other characters and their personalities and the mention of Sherlock Holmes, lol.
Please update soon!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the character; because it's written for NaNoWriMo, I haven't had the time to play around with them much beforehand, so it's great to hear they work well with the setting. Thank you very much for the review, I'll try to update soon! :)
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Nice beginning! You've already got me hooked- it's intriguing and bringing up lots of questions to ask which I won't since then it'll ruin the plot ;) Anyways, great chappie!Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm very pleased you find the story intriguing. :) XOXO, Kalina Report Review
Yay! A first chapter. I'm so very excited for you, Kali. The atmosphere of this story is already haunting. And I do think dramione suits the plot. ;)
Hermione was pitch-perfect and the cabbie just gave me the chills. And, of course, I cannot wait to see how Malfoy turns out. ^_^
*blushes* Thanks for mentioning me in your note...although I don't think I deserve any credit.
Please update soon!
Lee AnneAuthor's Response: Lee Anne! Ahah, it's my first official try with horror, so to speak, so I'm unspeakably pleased that it's already haunting. *hugs* Bwhahaha, we'll see. :P Personally, I think I chose Dramione just because I could and they might work well under extreme circumstances, but we'll see how they end up.
Oh, good, I'm so glad you liked the cabbie and Hermione! He wasn't intended to be frightening, though looking back, I can see why he was. Malfoy will be ... well, Malfoy, hopefully. I don't want to delve too far into OOC-ness, but as I don't have any practice with that, we'll see how it goes.
Of course I mentioned you, and of course you deserve credit! You helped me so much with the plot! *hugs* I could never have done it without you!
Aha, I shall try to update soon(ish). Tis Nano, so words, though crappy, should be flowing aplenty. XD
Thank you so much for this amazing review, Lee Anne. :) You've made my evening. ^^
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