wow, i'm kinda confused, but it seems...okay. I'll wait til i read more to say anything more definite.

Author's Response: all great writers start out confusing then become clear hope mine will to keep checking for updates so that i can get feed back

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It's a good start, would recommend coming up with a turning point soon and also what is harry's interest here? what is his role in all of this

Author's Response: Harry's role in this story is not very big because this is a(n) OC/Hermione Fic, he sent Drezzer to Hermione as a sign of caring that she not be lonely. It is that this is AU and Harry is the OC's friend that is what Harry's role is he is just a friend in this story nothing big like voldemort is going to happen that i know of YET, and if it does it will be the OC and Hermione facing this issue. Remember Harry's problem is over that is the only thing that i will be bringing in the plot line area.

Sorry if this dissuades you from reading my story but this is what i have in mind if you want a Harry/Hermione check out Destruction, My only H/H fic

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i love it!

keep writing!

this story is really good!

10/10

Author's Response: okay i am just going to say i definantly will. THanks for the review visit the story page often too check for updates again thanks for taking the time to review.

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