That was hilarious! Thanks for writing it :)Author's Response: It was my pleasure. Thanks for reading it :) Report Review
This was a different read then what I'm use to. It was interesting to say the least. I couldn't find anything wrong with the story. You didn't add uneeded words and the humor was not overdone. It was a very good read =]Author's Response: Thank you for the awesome review, lol I'm sure there are things wrong with the story but thanks for saying there weren't any. Thanks again. Report Review
Added to favourites! That was GREAT! I mean, there were a few grammar and spelling problems, but really, who cares when the story's that hilarious?! I love how Dumbledore enjoyed the stunt, that was a really nice little touch. And Professor McGonagall being that P.O.ed is perfectly in character too. And I loved at the beginning when James was begging Sirius not to jump because he thought he was trying to kill himself. That was very cute. 11/10!Author's Response: my thought was that Dumbledore seems to be a bit whacky so a whacky stunt would amuse him. and as for James begging Sirius not to jump that just hit me in the head as I was writing it and I couldn't help but add it in. McGonagall just has to be P.O.ed at least once in every story its nearly a rule :P
cute? cute! its Extreme, not cute! well ok it was cute lol
I will try and go through the story and fix the grammar and spelling thanks for pointing that out and for the GREAT review. Report Review
your right sirius does have that kinda 'free-spirit' thing going on... :) i love him and great storyAuthor's Response: thanx so much, i wanted Sirius to be a sort of brainy guy but absolutely and totally bonkers if you know what i mean.
thanks again for the review
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Oh dear a bouncing bunch of marauders! Poor McGonagall it seems she can't win in any era especially when Dumbledore's around- just as well he likes the odd joke and prank otherwise I have a feeling they'd be out of Hogwarts pretty quickly.
I have one question though, was Lily already with James when this happens or is the beginning of their relationship? 'Cos that's something you can expand on if you do a spin off from this one- just a suggestion.
I think you write wonderfully so please write something soon.Author's Response: I've never really though of weather they were together it just seemed like a cool thing to chuck into there :) although thinking on it they were probably apart, a stupid stunt ike that could sort of make Lilly re-evaluate her feelings towards James and find out she actually likes him instead of thinking hes a... umm yea that haha
I'm trying to write things but the only time I seem to get is on weekends :( and their way too short and far apart.
thanx for saying I write wonderfully I'm going red now lol Report Review
Haha that was such a fun story. Sirius is amazing. Great job! Nice way to add Lily in too.Author's Response: Thanx :) I'm glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
aha, yes that was well written. Most definally a dumbledore moment, and as for the boys, ehh boys will be boys.Author's Response: Thanks! and yes, I think boys will be boys we love to nearly kill ourselves :) Report Review
Hilarious! I needed something to brighten up my day, and this was just the thing. Thank you!Author's Response: Thank me? for what! I only wrote it. thank you for reading it and thank you again for enjoying it and again for leaving a review. Report Review
perfect one shot, i thought you got were able to portray every character perfectly, and i hope you think about writing a sequel or another marauder one-shot because of how well the characters where portrayed.
James2009Author's Response: I am defiantly thinking of writing more in the marauder era, I really enjoy the craziness they can have :)
I'm glad you enjoyed it and your review has made my day so thank you. Report Review
I, most certainly, enjoyed this little oneshot
It was funny, very inventive and very Marauder-ish
I loved it =]
spam_up_samAuthor's Response: thanks spam_up_sam I'm just glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
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