I welled up again. You have got to stop doing that to me! lol, I love it actually. When I first saw that it was updated, I didn't read it. I knew that if I was in a sad mood, it would have more effect. So I put on some sad songs and thought about all these horrible twists and turns going on in my life at the moment, then read it. It is amazing. I loved the 'walked, run, jogged and cycled down that road' bit. So true. The last two paragraphs were the saddest I think. But if I think this is sad, what is Adara's going to be like! Uh oh, better go and get another box of kleenex! Keep writing
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HPB
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Author's Response: I totally get you! I love reading sad stories, i always have to get in the "sad" mood before hand.
And Im glad you liked he 'walked,run,jogged and cycled part, I wasn't really too sure of it when I was writing it :)
I'm so happy you liked the last two paragraphs, I actually delayed posting the chapter up so I could get them right!
I re-doing some of Adara's chapter but Its going to be in the next few days. I havn't quite decided if I wanted to go for the sad kind of story or the uplifting but still sad story.
Anyway you'll find out soon enough :D

Thankyou so much for your review! It was so lovely and made me smile :)
-Becky x

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i loved it, what do u mean theres only one chapter left. please dont make it that short

Author's Response: haha, im sorry but it is a short story :)
and besides it would mess up my order of people and there is only one person left really ;)
but dont worry because i've got a good idea for a next story which im hoping to start sometime next week :)
thanks for the review!
-Becky x

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really good chapter. love it

Author's Response: Thankyou so much :)
Keep reading!
-Becky x

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love the first chapter. good intro

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i LOVE it.
it reminds me of my story a little... but better :)
check it out please :D
x

Author's Response: thankyou so much :D
I'll go check it out now :D
xx

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Awww, I am seriously welling up. She is just so strong and determined and knows exactly what to do even if everyone else thinks she is crazy. I love the memory about the conker, great way to compare them. OMG Sirius is next isn't he? I don't think I? am going to be able to stay dry eyed through that one. Keep writing and update soon
Hugs
HPB
:)

Author's Response: Im so glad your following me through this story its really great :)
and yes sirius's chapter is next in validation, im putting it up tonight.
Now im worried it wont live up to your expectations, haha. Must go make it sadder ;)

thankyou so much for the review!
-Becky xx

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This is the exact story I needed to find. Sad but sweet. I like how it is going to be from 4 different POV's. That should bne interesting. Keep writing
Hugs
HPB
:)

Author's Response: Thankyou so much :)
I definitly will keep writing :P

chapter 2 is in validation and chapter 3 is written, i just need to write 4 and were done ;)
thankyou!

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