again very good- i reallly like the flicking between the two characters-its very clever and really makes the reader alert. good mixture of short and complex sentences! would love to read more! Report Review
wow! amazing-i would never have thought to carry on the story this way!very cleverly written with a dark idea that could threaten to destroy all! well done-look forward to reading more!Author's Response: thank you my love (: Second chapter is up and am writing the third (: Report Review
souch, that was pretty good (: i want ot know what happens now! WRITE IT QUICK! lovee you Author's Response: Thanks babe (: am writing the second chapter as we speak, should have it up soon :D x Report Review
Good Start and idea. Cant wait to find out what happens next. Please keep writing. Report Review
Awesome beginning and please write more as this story sounds intrigiuing.Author's Response: will do thanks for reading Report Review
*Gulps* dear merlin, this can't be goodAuthor's Response: hehe :D make sure you check back to see what happens :D x Report Review
Really Really Good! well done can't wait for the next chapter keep up the good work! xAuthor's Response: thanks hun! Good luck with yours too :D x Report Review
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