Reading Reviews for Hold Your Breath
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Review #1, by Amaris Summer, 1978

1st August 2011:
I remember starting this over at fanfiction dot net and I am thrilled to have found it again. I am an avid Black Sisters fan and lately have discovered a love for Narcissa Black I didn't know I possessed. Of course when it comes to loving a character, I always tend to want to stick them in ships that would seem unlikely to most. You have no idea how pleased I am to have found such a lovely written piece of fanfiction for Cissy/Remus--or future Cissa/Remus in any case.

I love the characterization of the characters and Narcissa's voice already resonates loudly in the narrative. Your writing flows really well and I'm already a fan. I hope you continue this story as I will be avidly waiting.


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Review #2, by DemetersChild Summer, 1978

16th November 2009:
Hahah! This is lovely! Very well written. It flows nicely and I think you've captured the characters of the Black daughters quite well. I look forward to reading more!


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Review #3, by Pitch_Black Summer, 1978

16th November 2009:
I loved it. It's a drawn out, well established beginning and I can't wait to see what happens next.

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Review #4, by emmma098 Summer, 1978

16th November 2009:
that was lovely. I liked narcissa's characterisation.
can't wait for more!!

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