Hi, it's sexyscorp from the forums. I'm your Secret Santa :)
Because it's taken me so long to give you your present (my computer broke then I was holidaying) I've decided to review ALL of your stories.
This is a really creative and original idea. I think if you refine it, it could be really good.
I liked the idea that Lesley could telepathically communitcate with the teachers, it gives a nice twist.
I'd love to know more about Lesley's history generally, and at Hogwart's in particular.
I really liked the last line, I think it will lead onto the next chapter really nicely.
Great start to such a creative story :)Author's Response: Wow! Serious? Thank you! I feel really bad, I went away all holidays and I was leasing a horse, so we all know where I was over christmas.
Your reviews have helped shaped my writing, I hold it close when I continue to write. Thanks again.
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