Hi, it's sexyscorp from the forums. I'm your Secret Santa :) Because it's taken me so long to give you your present (my computer broke then I was holidaying) I've decided to review ALL of your stories. This is a really creative and original idea. I think if you refine it, it could be really good. I liked the idea that Lesley could telepathically communitcate with the teachers, it gives a nice twist. I'd love to know more about Lesley's history generally, and at Hogwart's in particular. I really liked the last line, I think it will lead onto the next chapter really nicely. Great start to such a creative story :)Author's Response: Wow! Serious? Thank you! I feel really bad, I went away all holidays and I was leasing a horse, so we all know where I was over christmas. Your reviews have helped shaped my writing, I hold it close when I continue to write. Thanks again. ~ Peaky Report Review
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