Reading Reviews for The Other One Who Lived
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Review #1, by Yemi Hikari Alyssa

18th December 2010:
You didn't plan out your story. There are a bunch of OCs here. And it seems to have no rising and falling action. But the biggest thing is, is this. How can she be the other one who lived? A killing curse only kills one person, so it went to hit Harry and only Harry. Thus it is only Harry who can have that title, as it was it rebounding off of him that stopped V, which would have prevented him from aiming at the female sibling.

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Review #2, by chris The Leaky Cauldron

23rd November 2009:
interesting so far. Hope you write another chapter.

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