Wow, this story is amazing! I'm really glad to have come across it. You kept the characters quite canon and the storyline fits in the context you placed it in. Excellent work! Report Review
Wow! This was spectacular! I love your writing! ;)Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm happy you liked it. :)
Aw. I love how Draco's like, “MUM!!! THERE’S A DEAD WOMAN IN THE DRAWING ROOM WITH PROFESSOR SNAPE!!!” hee hee hee... bloody brilliant!Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing not one, but two of my stories! Haha, I'm glad you liked that line! I have to admit, it was funny to write. :) Report Review
Hey, clearcutdiamond here with your review from the forums! I'm so sorry for taking so long to get to this!
I liked this chapter a lot because I've never read anything like it before. It was original and well-written. I think you wrote Bellatrix really well. You described her as JKR did and your whole plot line is really great because it seems like something that could have really happened.
I didn't spot any grammatical errors, which is great. The dialogue was really well done, as was the way you wrote Narcissa. I pitied Snape in this because Bellatrix was just as she's supposed to be - cruel and sadistic.
I loved the way Bellatrix's plan backfired. The last line was so sad, it really shows how much Snape loved Lily. Another reason I liked this was because it was so well-written in terms of the canon characters, the dialogue and just the situation in general that it felt like a missing moment from HP. Anyways, really well done!
AmandaAuthor's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm thrilled that you thought Bellatrix was written well -- she's the character I have the most fun writing. Oh, and I'm glad that it felt like a missing moment, that's what I hoped it would come off as.
Thanks again! Report Review
Ah, Bellatrix. You spiteful woman. I absolutely enjoyed this. At first I was a bit skeptical, but in the end I found I enjoyed it. It made me cackle when Bella's plan backfired in her face. Good thing I was alone when that happened. ;)
Anyways, I have to say that there was quite a lot of dialogue as opposed to action but I think you kneaded it in very nicely and you certainly got your point across.
Thank you for such an intriguing and amusing read.
This does seem like something Bellatrix would do sadly enough.Author's Response: Thank you so much for the wonderful review!
I'm glad you think it's somethinkg Bella would do - personally, I found the idea for this story so...out-there and wacko I was skeptical about posting it.
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks again. ;) Report Review
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