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Review #1, by toothpick Two

19th December 2009:
Very nice that you wrote them their age (Draco not wanting to have a girlfriend - yet and Pansy being emotional and whiny - she'll grow out of it.. hopefully).

I like these two sentences:
"She, just wanted to know why he wasn't climbing down to save her."
"She could play them better than him anyway."

Cute that Pansy wanted to save the starfish. She is a bit of a bully in the books so it makes her a bit more complex when she goes around saving animals (starfish of all things).

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Review #2, by toothpick One

12th December 2009:
"No, you didn't," he said sourly, before spurring his horse and riding off toward his house.

I like this story. I wanna see where you're taking this. This is so complex. It must be really difficult for Pansy. That you kinda have to not do your best for fear of hurting your friend/crush/someoneyoucareabout. I like how Pansy is more naturally talented than Draco and not completely helpess, but at the same time hopelessly in crush with Draco. Boys like that don't deserve girls like that, but in all fairness we haven't really seen that much of Draco and Pansy yet, so I'm way ahead. Please continue this (as I'm assuming this is the first chapter?) =)

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Review #3, by waiting4tomarrow One

6th November 2009:
Its really cute! I wish you would had made it longer!

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Review #4, by snowlilly One

29th October 2009:
SEQUALLL![Or sequel?] anyway, I think you should make a longer story.

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