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Review #1, by Wistful_Stargazer Meetings with Slytherins

13th December 2009:
'Having Zabini looking at me with lust in his eyes was just really shocking and unfamiliar to me. So I turned around again to leave, Unfortunately that was not happening. He grabbed my arm before I could start walking again.

"You know you keep acting that way around guys you will never find you soul mate, or anyone that would want to be with you"

"How dare you. If my soul mates are those the wand showed me I want nothing to do with them, and if other guys act like you right now then I'll be happier single." He stepped closer to me, brushing his mouth near my ear and whispering like there was other people in the room.

"If you gave some of us guys a chance you might come to find you like us. That we are not all like Malfoy" He leaned his head into my hair and breathed in deeply then lowered his lips to my neck and lightly kissed it. Oh Gods the sensations running though me just then were wonderful. I didn't expect my body to react like that to Zabini. My knees grew weak, my breathing went shallow and my head starting spinning. I wanted nothing more than to have him kiss my lips and get lost in him.'

*::fans faces::*
Holy shite! Blaise seducing Hermione for that little bit was freaking sexy as sin--lucky girl!
;~D

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Hmm, by Blaise having paired Hermione up with Draco for rounds, it appears that he is trying to give Hermione a chance to get to know him (Draco) and give him a chance, and perhaps give Draco a chance to get to know her too.

I think that it is fantastic that Blaise keeps jumping on Draco for calling Hermione a Mudblood (even when she is not there, that they know of).

~*~*~
'Malfoy took notice and starred right over at me. He mouthed something to me that I did not understand and when he noticed the confusion on my face he mouthed it slower and clearer, this time I understood and I could not belive it.

"You are mine tonight" is what he said.'

*::smirking up a storm::*
Oh my, that could be taken as his informing her that he intends to ravish her--freaking lucky Hermione!
;~D

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*::cackling::*
I thought that it was hilarious that Draco continued to display the mannerisms of a ferret for a week after having been changed back into his normal form. It was sweet of Blaise to have shared that story with Hermione to help her to feel more at ease regarding her having to do rounds with Draco that evening.

~*~*~
Great story so far. I'm looking forward to reading additional chapters.
=)

Well done--keep up the good work!
:D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the reviews. this is a rather short story but I liked how it came out anyway. It was intended to be a one-shot but I wrote so much just came to be a short story.

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Review #2, by Wistful_Stargazer Confusion

13th December 2009:
Hmm, I'm wondering if Blaise and/or Professor Snape could also be some of Hermione's soul mates. Wouldn't that be something? LOL
:p

Well done--keep up the good work!
:D

Author's Response: never know. lol

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Review #3, by Wistful_Stargazer Why Me!!!

13th December 2009:
Even though Hermione found out that Nott is also one of her soul mates, I think that she gave up too soon in releasing the spell of identifying her soul mates from her wand... you know?

Hmm, what is up with Blaise not having any clothes in his room? I like how he has a mirror above his bed--kinky boy!
;~D

Well done--keep up the good work!
:D

Grr, more grammatical, spelling, and punctuation errors found but too tired to point out.

Author's Response: I think I wrote some of this story to fast up to the point I have. I have slowed down a little bit and have been working on the over all flow of the story. Hopefully after chap 10 it will be over all better in story and everything else.

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Review #4, by Wistful_Stargazer To love a Slytherin?? Oh God..

13th December 2009:
WooHoo! Draco Malfoy is one of Hermione's soul mates--brilliant!
;~D

Well done--keep up the good work!
:D

I'm too tired to bring any grammatical/spelling errors to your attention... sorry.
=C

Author's Response: I have always loved Draco being paired with Hermione. I am also a lover of Blaise and Hermione also.

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Review #5, by Wistful_Stargazer The Spell

13th December 2009:
It is obvious that Hermione is attracted to Sirius in that she feels that his voice is sexy. It is also apparent that Sirius is attracted to Hermione as well with his being disappointed in her desire to look up a "soul mate finding" spell, his nervousness, and later jealousy when she is greeting Ron and Harry.

Hmm, it is seems that Sirius knows something that Hermione does not in regards to knowing that she has not yet cast the spell (because of his checking out her wand to see the color, if any, it would light up).

Oooo! Hermione has more than one soul mate--lucky girl!
;~D

WooHoo! Sirius is one of Hermione's soul mates--freaking lucky girl!
;~D

Well done--keep up the good work!
:D

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F.Y.I.--errors found needing correction:

1) 'You may find this person when you are young, you may find then ["then" should be "them"] when you grow up , or you may not find them at all and continue going threw ["threw" should be "through"] relationships and never being filled with that undeniable feeling of true love.'

2) 'Having just turned Eightteen ["Eightteen" should be "eighteen"] this summer I was thinking alot about this.'

3) 'I was doing research at the orders ["orders" should be "Order's"] headquarters trying to find any information on soul mates.'

4) 'My head was buried in this rather large book called "Soul mates ["mates" should be "Mates"] through out ["through out" should be "Throughout"] the generations ["generations" should be "Generations"]" When ["When" should be "when"] Sirius walked into his library.'

5) 'He said in hi s ["hi s" should be "his"] very sexy voice.'

6) 'I quickly followed him threw ["threw" should be "through"] the house and up to the attic.'

7) '"What are we doing here ["here" should be "here?"]" I asked looking around the room.'

8) 'You will have to make the choice on when to cast the releasing spell and than ["than" should be "then"] you will not know anymore than those revealed already.'

9) 'I couldn't believe all the possibility's going threw ["threw" should be "through"] my head.'

10) 'Then the funny one was any of the order ["order" should be "Order"] members, ...'

11) 'As I leaned against the door way ["door way" should be "doorway"] watching him I began to laugh a little to my self ["my self" should be "myself"].'

12) 'Harry and the Weasley's ["Weasley's" should be "Weasleys"] had arrived to stay the night ...'

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Read later review for response to grammer and other corrections. I am thankful for people who point out errors along with good things. Thank you again.

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