Hey are you going to update soon? I really want to read more!!!

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WHY DID THAT HAVE TO BE SO SHORT?

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love your story!

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i really like your writing! you are very talented:) i was looking for your other story "the edge" because i love this one and im really into your writing style but i could not find it :( i will look for it again though :P
p.s. this chapter is great!!! i liked the build up to what Colton did to make Bee build up all walls she has. nice one :)

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it didn't seem like a filler to me :) i love love loove
your story!! the pace and plot are both perfect :D
please please keep updating or i will go crazy ;)

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no!!! poor Sirius!! i guess it will make it all the more satisfying when him and bee finally do have a happy ending :) if they do :O please let them have a happy ending :P
anyways love the story to bits! its so great!

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omg omg omg i am enjoying this story SO much!!! please dont ever stop updating! its so good, i feel like i cant really express very well how much i enjoy the characters and such so just take my word for it ;) :) :P

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I freaking love ur story! God its so good:) i think thy need to br honest with each other.

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Love it!! But is Colton who stole the vcard the same Colton from the first chapter??

Author's Response: yupp, the same guy in the memories.

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keep writing!! I love it!

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KEEP WRITING! your story is very interesting and entertaining and i love it! i love how her nickname is bee or bumble bee! its so cute:) i cant believe she let her physical relationship with serious stay that long before she cracked! poor bee:(
UPDATE SOON!

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Gah,Your story kept me up so late last night!!! I love your story and feel bad for bee:( she shouldnt have trusted coltan! At that age u cant trust any guy not to be a downright prick! There all so insensitive!! Keep writing your story cause its really good! Great job!

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Gah! This blasted story kept me up until two in the morning. It's really good :) Thanks.

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I really am enjoying this story, love the name Braxtany. She is such a great character. I'm guess the reason why she doesn't date has to do with Colton? Would love to read more.

~Vicky

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I hope you know your story is killing me.
I just love it so much! Ugh I know Bee probably has her reasons, but I really wish she would just start dating Sirius! I mean Siriusly! ;)
UPDATE A.S.A.P I WILL BE WAITING!!!

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Hope she won't break off this thing between her and Sirius! He's just so sweet and he actually cares about Bee :) Though the thing with ten girls in a week can be a little bit disturbing if he really want to get serious with her :D
I really wonder what would she do if Declan offered her the same deal as Sirius did - to be friend with benefits :P
All in all, great story! Update soon! :))

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This is really good! Update soon!

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Pretty Please update soon!

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well, arent they cute little kids?
lol, i was SO expecting that. i mean, bee has only just began to accept her physical attachment to pads and it will be a while before she realised that she loves him...
and well, here they are, in a physical relationship, still bickering like usual and yet, there is now a civilised touch to them.
i feel for black, though.. he must really have it hard for bee, even though the dude needs lessons on explaining his feelings.. :D
anyway, update soon!
loyally,
fanna

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i really really love your story! keep updating please !

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hmmm... so bee is in denial huh?
not completely un-understandable either...
i mean, you can't exactly expect a girl to believe that the biggest man-whole the world has ever seen is actually going serious for once... too risky a statement to believe..
but i really love pads and i hope bee gives him a chance..
reading on,
fanna

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awww.. poor bee doesn't have enough experience in the crazy-hormones department, so it looks like she is naive to sirius's feelings.. i mean, even a tomboy-ish woman like me can see that padfoot has it in for her, real bad..
though, this does make things a lot more interesting...
reading on,
fanna

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hey there! that is quite an interesting start you've got here!
i immediately fell in love with this chaoter because i can compare to bee without an effort-- i'm not as wild as she is, but i'm blunt, get off effortlessly and makeup and girls aren't really my kind of things either..
thus, i'm feeling very optimistic towards this story..
you are an amazing writer!
reading on interested-ly,
fanna

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Wow, can't wait for the next chapter to see how the mentally unstable person deals with what she just did. Should be interesting...
I love the story so far! Keep it up!
I have one question, what the hell did Colton do to her? That is the reason why she refuses to love now, right?

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WRITE MORE! I LOVE IT!

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