i read this story while i was planning my vacation. it was so good i couldn't focus on anything else :) it captured me and didn't let go even after the final sentence, it was absolutely briliant!Author's Response: What a wonderful thing to say! Thank you so much!! I worked really hard on this story, and I wrote it in a different style because of the challenge it was written for. Because of that, I appreciate the reviews on it SO much! I hope you have a nice vacation! :D Report Review
Definitely confusing, since I'm not one to pick up on subtleties. XD But I loved it anyway. The intensity and emotions were great!Author's Response: Thanks for your honesty, haha! I knew this would end up fairly twisted, but it was so fun to write! I'm so happy that you decided to check out some of my other stuff; thanks, hon! :D Report Review
wow! the story captured me from the beginning to the end! it was really intense the way you wrote it but it all worked out really well together. i like the length that you have esp since its a one shot its nice to get the most out of it that you can.. i didnt see any major spelling or grammer mistakes.. great job hun.. i really liked the interaction between draco and hermione.. loved it.. keep up the good work..
~Slytherinchica08~Author's Response: Yay! I'm SO happy that you got a chance to read this! That's wonderful! Your review is great; very constructive and so nice! It's good to hear someone comment on the length because sometimes I'm not certain if I've made things too long. I tend to run long, vs. short. I'm glad that it was smooth, and that it captured you! Thank you so much!! :D Report Review
Hello, I'm here to review for the challenge! I'm sorry for the extended delay, I have been super busy.
This is going to sound awful, but I am so glad that this was hard for you. Sometimes, writing to simply write is the best medicine. It clears the mind and really helps some writers to hone what they want to say or how they want to say something. I have to say that I thoroughly enjoyed this one-shot. It came straight out of your head, you put it out there, and it was great! Overall, this was absolutely great! :]]Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! Yeah, this was the very first challenge I ever chose to participate in. I did it only because I knew it would stretch me, heehee. I'm so glad I did, too! It taught me a new way to write! I even typed some of it with my eyes closed, only going back to make sure I didn't spell anything wrong. It's a weird feeling to pull emotions straight from your heart into your head and then subsequently through your fingers, haha!
Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it, and I look forward to knowing who wins! :D Report Review
holy hell. i'm speechless.
that was absolutely fantastic.Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! This was my first hand at a challenge; you're words really mean a lot! I hope you'll check out my other stuff! :D Report Review
Very nice. Definately sequal-worthy (although it's pretty awesome standing alone as well). :)Author's Response: Thank you very much! Worth a sequel, eh? Wow! That's wonderful! Thank you so much for reviewing! :D Report Review
Haha, nice! Not a big fan of Draco/Hermione, but this one was pretty good. Definitely a stream of consciousness. :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy you reviewed; writing this way was definitely a challenge and I'm glad to know what you think! Thank you for checking it out, even though you don't normally roll with Dramione, heehee :D Report Review
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