Like it! Definitely. Very nice. . .why does Snape care about him? And I like that Snape's married, and has children. It's intrigueing to think about him with ties, and being. . .I don't know, normal. Can't wait to see how this turns out!

The Key

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, they keep me motivated.

Snape cares because Lily was his childhood friend and he feels that Harry is his last connection to her. I hope that explains a few things.

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That was wonderful! Love the twin. . .he'll be perfect later on in the story.

It's perfect the way you mix story and fiction [lol, never mind the fact that the original story was fiction]. Beautiful writing. 9/10, definitely. I must go read the next chapters now!

The Key

Author's Response: Thank you for such a nice review.

I hope you enjoy the rest of the chapters as much as you liked this one.

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I don't normally read stories where Harry has a twin who also survived Halloween, but I'll give this a chance.

Interesting way of redeeming Snape, I must say. Marry him off, to someone other than a Death Eater, and give him kids. I do have a question, though. When the kids start Hogwarts, will "Jordan" attend as a triplet, or are the twins older?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.

Originally I wasn't planning on Harry being a twin, but a friend suggested it and I liked the idea.

Snape has always been one of my favourite characters and I think there will be a lot of twists with him. As for answering your question, I hadn't thought of that to be honest. It might be good to have that though, as it would be a better way of hiding Harry's true identity.

I hope I don't let you down.

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Its good to find out what happened when Hagrid got Vincent!!! Its a good twist also that petuia actually feels something for her nephew!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

I thought it would be good to fill in the gaps and I'm glad you are more informed, even though i could just tell you in person lol.

Myra

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Very good can't wait to read on!!!

Author's Response: Thanks lol!

Glad to hear you want to read on, very good news lol

Myra

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Yeah that was quite good!!! Cant wait to read on!!!

Author's Response: Lol

You're meant to be supportive though!

Myra

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it's so very different strait out, nice.
what happens now are you going to jump through time?
which one is the chosen one/ which one gets his girl?
oh update please Karchy

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, it keeps me motivated.

You'll have to wait and see lol. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I've posted the third chapter so it should be up soon hopefully.

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Even more curious. Snape married? Ah well it is AU. Though I'm not certain what the Dark Lord will say when he eventually finds out that the one who's destined to defeat him is being raised by one of his own.

Looking to see how this one progresses.

apAidan

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. It gives me a lot of motivation to continue.

Snape marrying was an on the spot sort of decision lol. I prefer AU books to be honest, it's something different for a change that's why I decided to write one lol. I posted the next chapter today so I dunno when it will be validated.

Hope you enjoy it anyway.

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Well, that's a bit different. Harry not being the BWL and he still gets top billing in the story.

An interesting beginning, I'm curious to see where you go with this. I wonder how many other people don't know the Potters had twins.

Looking forward to see how this progresses.

apAidan

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing on my story.

I hope you enjoy the rest of it, once I have all the other chapters posted.

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