holy mother of merlin. this is the best one shot i have ever read!!! you have an amazing way with words! i love it! it's so cute!!! i've been looking for inspiration to start continue with mine and this is it! thankyou so much!! you're amazing!! mwah!Author's Response: I'm so overwhelmed! Awe! Thank you! You are amazing too Report Review
Really really good!
I loved it,make more one-shots like this.
It was perfect and made me LOL:)Author's Response: Thanks! I don't like it at all anymore but I'm glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
"HOLY GUACAMOLE, HE KNOWS!"
I laughed so much! I love how much she's panicking. And I love how he can make her stop panicking as soon as he gets her to actually look at him and talk. And I love that he's just the perfect combination of sweet and sexy.
It was also really an impressive feat that you portrayed all the chaos in Rose's head without the story seeming garbled. All her confusion is somehow crystal clear.Author's Response: I know! He's seriously the best mix of boy and sweet and mad and angry and lusty and oh god I love him. I'm so glad you liked how I wrote Rose in her point of view! I always try not to jam characters' thoughts all over the place so I'm happy I did a good job for you :D Report Review
That was really cute! A little cliche, but I didn't care. Cliches are cute beasts! There's no point in denying it. Rose's thoughts were adorable and funny. I liked that story a lot ^^.
Next stop: Love and Broomsticks, be aware :D.Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! The story was very spur of the moment :P thanks for the review! Report Review
I really liked it. It was super cute :)Author's Response: I'm glad :D Report Review
is there gonna be another chapter for this?!?!?! i like this one xDAuthor's Response: Haha, I'm glad you do! But sadly it's only a one shot :P Report Review
Very funny, I think the people around me think I'm crazy!! :DAuthor's Response: Why, are you laughing out loud? :D Report Review
ah. ahhh. ahh. ahhh. aahh. ahh. :) that was so cute and hormone-y? hahaha I loved it. I was giggling and laughing really awkwardly throughout the whole thing. it was really good :) yayy. ha. no, I'll stop now. ANYWAYS, this was so great. I love all of your stories a lot. they're lovely. :)Author's Response: You are lovely for saying that ^_^ Report Review
That was pretty feckin' awesome. ^_^
This is exactly how I feel about this guy, so I could totally relate. Great job! 10/10!Author's Response: RIGHT? I feel like every girl has her freak out crush that she just wants to pounce. thx for the great review! Report Review
BEST STORY EVER!
yep, enough said.Author's Response: ♥
It definitely isn't :3 but thank you. Report Review
Oh my God. I totally love this. I am literally squealing in happiness and I couldn't breathe because it was so cute and I was also almost bursting from laughter.
It was fantastic. :)
“You think in you’re mind too much, too,” he says softly.
As opposed to thinking outside her mind. I actually can't resist adding that in.
Rose sounds so cute, kind of different to usual but in a good way because it can get so tiring having a serious, nerdy, boring Rose. She is fabulous. :)
So good job and I think you should do some more Rose/Scorpius. :)Author's Response: Hahaha, Scorpius was trying to say that she doesn't speak her mind enough; she overplays stuff in her head and has conversations in her head instead of with the other person :P
Rose/Scorpius fics have become my forte at the moment ;) Thanks for the review! Report Review
! I LOVE THIS ONE-SHOT!!!Author's Response: :D
Look at this, folks! The amount of EXCLAMATION POINTS I GOT!
That's right, take a good look.
:) Report Review
This had the perfect balance of humour, passion and cuteness :) And of course, embarrassing incidents! Gotta love those. They make me feel as though I'm not the only awkward one out there! Haha :)
Really liked it!
xxAuthor's Response: Hahaha, I think we've all been there :P I'm glad you liked it, it was something I just jotted down one night haha. Report Review
awesome story!! I wish there was a sequel, you are a fantastic writer :DAuthor's Response: AWE SHUCKS. You are the cutest! Thank you.
And there may be no sequel for Timebomb but I have a R/S novella called Me Versus Everyone! And my new R/S one-shot called Cosmic Love is coming as soon as the queue opens up again! Report Review
Oh, that was adorable - they are SO cute!Author's Response: That they are :) Keep on the lookout for my next Rose/Scorpius one-shot! Report Review
HEHE, FAVORITE STORY FROM YOU EVER!! I swear, this was so cute and loony (on Rose's behalf of course) and I can't help but feel how stressed she is from keeping her feelings in. Oh my God, I loved this, especially the ending, way cute. (:Author's Response: AWE! Thanks so much, babe! I'm glad you enjoyed the tension, I liked writing it! It was a bit difficult at times; every girl's gone through it you know? It's difficult to grasp just one thought. But I'm very glad you liked it! ^_^ Report Review
Brilliant... Hooked to the very end... :DAuthor's Response: Really!? Thank you :) Report Review
I loved the ending, that was so cute. A nervous Rose was nice to see, as it's different from the majority of Rose/Scorpius stories. Great one-shot, its very pleasant and light but heavy enough to capture the depth of their relationship. I'm looking forward to reading more by you :)Author's Response: Depth was something I did want a little bit of, thanks for noticing! Not alot of people read between the lines of my fics sometimes, but you're on point :] thx for the review! Report Review
Wrong. First of all; MATHS! Have you ever even read Harry Potter?! Since when was MATHS a part of Potions, let alone Hogwarts. I assume you mean Arithmancy; the closest wizard equivalant of Maths; which is a whole different subject. Brush up on your subjects and maybe /i'd concentrate better on your story rather than get irritated by your obvious lack of knowledge.Author's Response: 1. You'd be a noob to write HP fanfiction and not have read Harry Potter.
2. I considered next gen. Potions to carry equations. I was just playing around with the simple idea. Potions is a sort of science, in my book. And math & science go hand in hand, obviously.
3. Arithmancy is indeed a whole new subject, congratulations.
4. Let's calm down, buzzkill mcgee.
Don't like, don't read. You're obviously not open-minded to creativity, since you get irritated so easily at facts that don't even make up the whole idea/reason for the fic. There was a politer way of making your voice heard, this not being one of them.
Thanks. Report Review
like it cant wait 2 read more xxxAuthor's Response: Sorry sweetie, it's a one-shot, there is no more :[ But I have other Rose/Scorpius stories on my author's page! I'm sure I have enough to satisfy your needs ;]
thx for the review! Report Review
Omg I love this story!
It was hilarious and cute and sexy and i can totally relate to Rose haha. If I was on a bed with Scorpius I would be a ticking timebomb as well =PAuthor's Response: Haha, I thought of cute/sexy as comparison too. Weird lol. :] great minds think alike. Omg, don't even get me started on pretending what it would be like with that handsome blonde anywhere near you on a bed... *faints* Report Review
i love this story, so cute, so good!
i like how u draw it out to the point where i am practically screaming at the screen for them to kiss already. :)Author's Response: Hahah, moments like those, when you're full of frustration because they haven't kissed yet... those are the greatest :D lol thanks for the review, I'm so glad you enjoyed! Report Review
I simply love every single one of your stories that I've read! Author's Response: :3 That means alot to me.
Thank you so much ♥ Report Review
Love love love this. At first, I thought it was a bit typical, but you really develop their friendship as it goes forward.
Great job! :)
--Kate/RPAuthor's Response: Thank you! :] Report Review
Hehehe, ahhh I loved this one-shot, too. I also wish this went longer :( (It was really REALLY long already but, uhh, hehe.) "I'm not that kind." Awesome, lol.
-Sarah :)Author's Response: Haha, I get what you mean. You wish it never ended. Don't worry though, I have two more Rose/Scorpius one-shots you can feast your eyes on. if you haven't already ;]
=] thanks for reviewing! and for the great rating, i don't deserve it! Report Review
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