{reviewid: 2297691, reviewer: 'simi%20potter'}
11th February 2010:
Oh My God that was so sweet
I loved it
10/10
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{reviewid: 2272755, reviewer: 'mizzxpearl'}
23rd December 2009:
a cute ending to a cute story! :)
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{reviewid: 2264122, reviewer: 'JamesBlackPower'}
7th December 2009:
aww!!! how cute!!! it was a really great chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you ^^
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{reviewid: 2264076, reviewer: 'Paloma%20Patil'}
7th December 2009:
That was a cute ending to your story. I'm glad they sorted it out. Well done.
PP
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
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{reviewid: 2252447, reviewer: 'Paloma%20Patil'}
11th November 2009:
That was pretty funny. Sounds like the worst kiss ever - lol! It was a great stylistic choice to have both Lily and James narrate this chapter.
I hope you get the chance to update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you.
I'm glad you like it. I was afraid that mixing the two different point of view would be difficult to read but I didn't want to repeat everything twice.
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{reviewid: 2251248, reviewer: 'mizzxpearl'}
8th November 2009:
very nice :)!
update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you
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{reviewid: 2249054, reviewer: 'Paloma%20Patil'}
4th November 2009:
My god - boys can be so adorably clueless! Poor Lily (and poor James)
Interested to see how this is resolved. Update soon.
Paloma
Author's Response: Thank you again.
The next chapter is waiting for validation. It should be up soon.
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{reviewid: 2249052, reviewer: 'Paloma%20Patil'}
4th November 2009:
The worst kiss ever - LOL! That would be devestating.
Off to read more.
Paloma
Author's Response: Thank you for your review ^^
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{reviewid: 2248772, reviewer: 'mizzxpearl'}
3rd November 2009:
hahahahah i swearrr this story is soo frikkinn cuteee
Author's Response: Thank you very much
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{reviewid: 2244195, reviewer: 'Sierra'}
27th October 2009:
GREAT starting!is next chap gonna come out soon?
BTW:10/10!^_^ :D
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you like it.
The next chapter is already written I'll post it as soon as possible.
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