Hahaha that was funny LOL.Only Fred and George would have an elephant stashed some where or would bring one as a birthday gift LOLAuthor's Response: Thanks! for the review. Report Review
Haha :P That was funny :D It really helped out today ^^ And yes I do have an elephant in my backyard... sure you don't want it? Oh the irony I was reading your story and you know the advertisements you get in the sidebar? Well it's of an elephant. Seriously. Not kidding. In fact I'm staring at it right now XD
Oh and a tip, you might want to consider some more spacing it makes look a bit neater ;) So yeah.. I think I'm done blocking this review up with smileys :D
Author's Response: haha no elephants! lol its just your luck that the ads picked out an elephant haha that is just classic.
Thanks for the tip I will try and sort out the spacing shortly :)
Thanks for the awesome review. Report Review
This is absolutely brilliant, so funny! I was in fits of laughter when I read this, it's just so Fred and George who are definitley my favourite ever characters. Mischeif was definitely managed.Author's Response: thanx :) I'm really glad you liked it and the twins are some of my favorite characters too Report Review
This was a piece of reading a desperatly needed. I was laughing all they way! I think i laughed hardest at Molly's reaction. The way the twins talk is what I always liked about them, they're perfectly in canon to me here, and with an extra of someting i cant really put my finger on - I guess that's you - which I truly loved. Their dialogue was impeccable, and so was the totally original settings and ideas ( the biting glove, the elephant)
My compliments on a well written humorus piece that gets the spirit up.Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I only started writing a few months ago so your comments on the dialogue are really heartening. well just thank you. Report Review
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I think this is a wonderful little look at the Weasleys and the way the twins think. Their sense of humour is surreal, but it makes sense to them! THey were really only just trying to be nice! And it would certainly be a birthday Ron wouldn't forget!Author's Response: Thank you Noblevyne for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Haha I'm sure Ron will never ever forget that birthday. Report Review
Hahahaha oh my goodness that's awesome!Author's Response: Thanks GrintsGal :D Report Review
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