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Review #1, by Mrs_Lovegood Chapter 1

1st November 2009:
I just had to drop by.

First of, I have to say you make me actually like the first person POV. I usually run away from it, but I have to admit it, the first line is simply beautiful and it wouldn't work as well any other way. Overall, it is an amazing first chapter. I love how you focus around small things - the potato peeling for example, such a nice detail - and how that makes the characters so realistic and the whole chapter so much more terrible.

So, well, this review doesn't make your chapter justice and I definitely should have chosen to write it before midnight. Any way, be sure to continue it, I'm waiting for your next chapter!

Lucy

Author's Response: LUCYLUCYLUCY. -adores- Thank you so much for the review, my lovely. I'll attempt another chapter...one day...perhaps. I'm so glad you liked it, and I'll hope you mean the fact that this chapter is terrible as a compliment. :P

- emma xx


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Review #2, by Leonie Chapter 1

28th October 2009:
Well firstly I think the opening line is great and sets the tone for the story. You also made me attached to Ted in the first chapter which is wonderful but also awful because now I'll be really upset when he dies, but I'm sure it will be worth it with how you write it. Both Ted and Andromeda feel like real people, particularly when Ted climbs the stairs slowly and Andromeda smashes the vase.

A lovely first chapter and good luck with the rest!

Author's Response: I know I forced you into this, my dear, but thank you. :P I did like making you attached to Ted, but I'm sad that you're sad that he has to, unfortunately, die. It's not my fault, I swear!

I love you, Red Leo Box!

- emma xx


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