{reviewid: 2518795, reviewer: 'the%20one%20that%20got%20away'}
8th May 2011:
awww I love this story, well done :)
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{reviewid: 2460564, reviewer: 'Brittany'}
6th January 2011:
This was really good. I love draco/hermione fanfics! Well done (:
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{reviewid: 2413282, reviewer: 'MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010'}
| Review #3, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 | Chapter 7 |
16th September 2010:
I only have one complaint and that is that the story was so short. you placed a lot of information in your chapters and they were really fast paced try going into more detail and spanning out situations over a few chapters instead of trying to have your characters solve their problem quickly. This will make your story easier to follow and enable you to tie up lose ends. you can even share multiple points of view.
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{reviewid: 2368065, reviewer: 'mizzimays'}
26th June 2010:
PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
Author's Response: That's it for this one. But i'm in the midst of planning two or three more Dramione fics. They'll start popping up as soon as I can after the staff break. Plus I'm working hard on my Hermione/Charlie fic, Fragile Virtue. There may be a sequel to this sometime in the future, but i'm not planning one now. Thanks for reading! :)
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{reviewid: 2360018, reviewer: 'xfirespritex'}
11th June 2010:
Excellent fic! Yay for Hermione and Draco ending up together.
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{reviewid: 2360012, reviewer: 'xfirespritex'}
11th June 2010:
Two points to Blaise for not being a prat and for giving good advice. Poor Draco. Please fix it soon, sad Draco makes me upset.
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{reviewid: 2359525, reviewer: 'xfirespritex'}
10th June 2010:
Well damn, getting right down to business aren't they? Good chapter though, especially considering how it is a relatively short chapter.
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{reviewid: 2356414, reviewer: 'damn_death_eater'}
4th June 2010:
oh my god!! no! it cant end!!! ill just have to read ALL your works!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for all of your reviews. :) I'm glad you liked it so much. I'd hold off on reading Schizophrenia though for now. As you can see, I haven't updated that one in a few...years. haha. If i decide to continue with that one I'll probably re-do the entire thing, so i wouldn't get started. but please read Fragile Virtue :D Its a little different, but similar in that it's a bit of a forbidden romance. Let me know what you think. Thanks :)
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{reviewid: 2356412, reviewer: 'damn_death_eater'}
4th June 2010:
happy ending to that chapter! i r3ally admire your sense of rhythm with the flow of words in your stories i really hope i can be as good as you.
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{reviewid: 2356410, reviewer: 'damn_death_eater'}
4th June 2010:
also god! so much drama! you are a really good writer.
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{reviewid: 2356401, reviewer: 'damn_death_eater'}
4th June 2010:
lol very softcore but entertaqining at the same time. good job.
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{reviewid: 2356400, reviewer: 'damn_death_eater'}
4th June 2010:
omg hot sexy fun chapter! awesome!
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{reviewid: 2356396, reviewer: 'damn_death_eater'}
4th June 2010:
this is sick and good and ZOMGF they are a really cute pairing!
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{reviewid: 2356395, reviewer: 'damn_death_eater'}
4th June 2010:
ZOMGF! thisi is one of the best ones i have read!! you ddint a really god job with the details and dialoge!!
:3 emlyn.
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{reviewid: 2353156, reviewer: 'darkmark_11'}
29th May 2010:
That was AH-MAZING! LOVE THIS STORY! short but swet...can't wait to read more of your stories! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm working hard on Fragile Virtue right now so feel free to check that out. :) I'm also working out the kinks in my head thinking of a new Dramione.
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{reviewid: 2346479, reviewer: 'mikalily'}
12th May 2010:
so is this the end or is there another one?? loved it though!! good job:) good to know that they got together!
Author's Response: This is it for now. I'm so happy with the way this one ended that I'm not planning on adding a sequel. But you can be sure that I'll be writing more Dramione fics in the future. :) Thanks!
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{reviewid: 2344589, reviewer: 'romeoxjuliet'}
9th May 2010:
oh my god, SO GOOD. I love that it ended with draco switching sides as a testament to the strength of his love (way better than hermione getting pregnant which is how a lot of good fan fictions end, and I don't find it very romantic).
but yours was SO romantic and SO good... I mean at first it was just physical, but they talked, too, and fell in love! :D I'm usually super disappointed when a fic ends, but this was actually very satisfying, haha! I'm excited to read more from you!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm thinking about different Dramione ideas now, but i'm not currently being inspired by them. haha. But I'm working really hard on a Hermione/Charlie piece right now. so feel free to check that out. :)
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{reviewid: 2340924, reviewer: 'amy'}
1st May 2010:
this was a great story i loved it shame its finished
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{reviewid: 2340284, reviewer: 'Ginny2951'}
30th April 2010:
Loved it! Did Love overcome power? Is there coming a Sequel? :)
(ps. sorry for my english, i know it sucks :P)
Author's Response: Thanks. Its kind of open-ended. You'll just have to come to your own conclusion about whether or not love overcame power. I'm not planning a sequel right now. I'm really happy with the way it ended. But if i get inspired, maybe. :)
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{reviewid: 2337964, reviewer: 'PotterGirl7145'}
25th April 2010:
WOW! I love the ending! Yay! She is with Draco again! You are so talented!
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{reviewid: 2337844, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
25th April 2010:
i'm glad Draco and Hermione got together and that they worked out their problems. i say u must write a sequel 4 this fantastic story. maybe Ron could try to ruin their relationship. what do u think?^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
Author's Response: I'm not currently planning a sequel for this one. Mostly because I really like how it turned out and I don't know if i'd really be able to improve it with a sequel. But if I get inspired, then maybe. :)
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{reviewid: 2334755, reviewer: 'romeoxjuliet'}
18th April 2010:
oh my f*ing GOD. ohhh my god. OH MY GOD.
this fanfic is sooo good. I'm sorry, but you are amazing. I mean, i know it's competely about like sex and thats sorta weird, but its totally awesome that draco's freaking in love with her. and blaise is surprisingly supportive.
please write more ASAP!!! I'm dying. DYING.
love you so much!
-romeoxjuliet
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm currently suffering from a terrible bout of writers block. However, I sense that it will soon pass and I'll have the next chapter up quick as a whip. :)
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{reviewid: 2332818, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
15th April 2010:
wow! Hermione did deserve how Draco hurt her when they talked together. i can't wait to see what Draco is going to do! is he going to make her jealous?^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
Author's Response: thats a great idea! haha i've been having some writers block recently. :) getting back into it now though. not quite sure how its going to all play out. you'll just have to keep reading and find out. haha
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{reviewid: 2329019, reviewer: 'annella_grace'}
9th April 2010:
i love blaise he is such an under rated character but he is so awesome its a shame
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{reviewid: 2324452, reviewer: 'mikalily'}
2nd April 2010:
yes! he better get her back!! update faster!
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