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Review #1, by xaverri The Playground

23rd December 2009:
Wow.
This is your first fic? It's awesome. The story flows really well in the second person style you set it in, and I think it works even better than it could have in the other usual styles. It's also very sweet, but not conventionally romantic, like how in the ending she jumps and he doesn't catch her, but just holds her close after instead. It's all very dreamy, reflective and sort of surreal, but unique and not cliche at all. I loved it:) will you be posting more fics here?

- anne -

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I'm really glad that you liked it :) I tried to make it feel kind of like a dream, so I'm glad that came across. I'm working on a novella right now, but that might take a while to get up.

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Review #2, by redherring The Playground

27th October 2009:
I loved this! It was beautifully written and I really liked your characterisations of the two of them, as well. I'm especially impressed seeing as it's your first posted fic and first go at second person! (which I thought worked really well, by the way :D) 9/10 :)

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for your wonderful review! :) I'm glad you liked the characterizations because it took me a while to get those two exactly how I wanted them. It's also nice to hear that you thought the second person worked. It was definitely something new for me. :D

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Review #3, by evanlyn The Playground

17th October 2009:
This is quite good, not really my cup of tea, just because I prefer it to have dialogue and second person is always a little weird :) but I admire your writing skill, it's very well written.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! :)
I understand about the second person thing... I think it's weird, and I wrote it. haha As for the dialogue, I tried writing it with dialogue, but it just looked and sounded weird. I prefer dialogue too. I'm glad you took the time to read and review :D


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Review #4, by macerinut The Playground

16th October 2009:
Wow, that was really good. Beautiful story and really well written.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! It's making me smile like crazy :) I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!

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