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Review #1, by collette michelle To Be A Man

28th October 2009:
Oh, this was just sweet. It was a lovely little read. I think the relationship between father and son we done well. I liked his iteration with Victoire and Dom too. Caught a few mistakes, nothing too distracting though.

Nice job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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Review #2, by redherring To Be A Man

23rd October 2009:
I really enjoyed that! I loved your take on Louis, and his interaction with the rest of his family as well. I also thought the way you approached the parent/child aspect was great, and it worked really well. All Louis's thoughts were just brilliant, as well, and I especially liked this line:

Louis looked at her astonished. This girl who he had barely even talked to had just come up to him and told him he was a jerk.

Hehe, it made me smile :) I'd suggest that you get this beta'd, though, because I spotted a few grammar mistakes, but apart from that I have pretty much no criticism! Great job, and thanks for entering my challenge :D

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you thought it worked well. Louis was fun to write! Alright, thank you!

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