great work! i really liked the story!!!it is a real cliffhanger at the end... to bad i have to do my revision for examinations now... or i would have read the whole series!!!Author's Response: thank you so much :) Report Review
Wow thats incredibly awkward!!!:S and just wondering Voldomort is dead in this book or not???Author's Response: Voldemort hasn't acended to power yet :) Report Review
NO! IT CAN'T HAPPEN!!! NO!!!Author's Response: haha i'm glad u like the story :) Report Review
I really hope that you know that Narcissa is Sirius Black's cousin. You should have used another name and really study up on your Harry Potter history.Author's Response: has nobody read this properly?? I clearely stated my reasoning on how this works is that Narcissa is ADOPTED. ADOPTED. ADOPTED. She is NOT RELATED to Sirius!
sorry 4 ranting, it jst annoys me greatly. Report Review
I love this and hate it at the same time!!! At first I hated the fact about the whole.Lupin.then when I was finally succumbing to him, you just had to burst her back to her real time! I can't decide which boy!Author's Response: haha but u still love harry right? at least i hope so! :) i'm glad at least u love it as well as hate it :) Report Review
so it basically explains who miley is... great stories so far :DAuthor's Response: thnx :) im glad u like it so far!!! Report Review
OK I REVIWED SO WERE ARE MY TACO'S ?>? Report Review
SHE CANT BE IN LOVE WITH WOLFIE!!! SHE LOVES HARRY! OMG!Author's Response: lolz ikr? but jst read on sweetie!!! :) Report Review
wow!!! amazing, i luved how she staneded her ground when she was talking to the dumb #@# (lol) malfoy and omg i just love ur books!!! lolzAuthor's Response: lolz thnx sweetie! :) Report Review
I love your stories. Just wanted to tell you.
You do know that definibly isn't a word, though, right? I think the work you're looking for is definitely...Author's Response: lolz yh, i figured tht out az i waz writin the 3rd book. haha
thnx 4 the review :) Report Review
OMG I LOVED HOW THAT ENDED!!!
Here's big fat 10/0 for you!!
I'm gonna read the next one now!Author's Response: yay! lolz thnk u so much!!! :) :) :) Report Review
Wow, I loved that poor Lupin!!
I can't wait to read more!Author's Response: lolz thnx! Report Review
Wow that WAS unexpected :O
As usual, I loved it!!Author's Response: thnx!! lolz i tried 2 make it tht way!!
thnx so much 4 stickin thro this series!
i've got 2 more bookz 2 go, && i rlly hope u like em enough 2 read em az i post!!! :)
Yay! A new chapter!!
I loved it, I wonder what is going to happen next? :)Author's Response: thnx! :)
i hope u like whtz gonna happen next! i no i do! ;) lolz
heh heh wow
I just realized this had been updated, how I missed it on the recently added list, I do not know...
hehhe nice memory :) LOOOL at how Severus just grabs Bellatrix's wand and she doesn't do anything.
The 'I-wonder-if-you-can-even-ATTEMPT-to-do-things-right' look was very funny! heh
Wow Kiley certainly let them fight it out, I kept thinking she was gonna intervene, but I guess those things needed to be said... wow if Severus ever finds out about him being Kiley's father, It's gonna be so awkward ;)
hehe 'Kiley looked back at Severus, a perplexed look on her face. Was he dying? that noise he just made sure sounded like it...' was he dying lool!
great chappie, I can't wait for the next one (hopefully this time I'll actually SEE it when it some out ;) )
I can't help but wonder what is gonna happen with Kiley when Severus marries Jasmine and has Kiley as a baby... if she's still around then... hmm... the possibilities are endless!!!
stiiill cannot get used to Remus and Kiley, tis quite sad :( where is Harry, ma boy? *sigh* poor Kiley, her life's a liiitle confuzzlecatedAuthor's Response: confuzzlecated omg i love it! lolz
i had a lot of fun makin this chappie! lolz
i no i couldn't get used 2 Lupin && Kiley @ 1st but then i wrote so much... lolz Harry'z gonna b like, wht the heck!??! when/if she comez back!!! ahahah!
thnx 4 readin! :) Report Review
Horay!!! A new chapter! I LOVED it! Miley + Lupin = baby?
It's so exciting!Author's Response: lolz i'm glad u think so!
haha i cant wait 2 upload the next chappie!!!
thnx 4 readin && stickin w/ these bookz 4 so long! ;) Report Review
Great chapter but I assumed that Kiley already knew cuz Harry prob told her... Anyway, great one I'll keep reading! :)
LynnAuthor's Response: i waz afraid ppl would think tht... but alas she doesn't! lolz
thnx 4 readin! :) Report Review
Oh poor Kiley! That was awesomeAuthor's Response: lolz thankz! Report Review
iiinteresting memory...I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT IT IS!!
yey, exciting, a new chappie :)
awww at Kiley/Miley never being able to find her way back! Vat is dis?! I so wanna know what Harry and George and Fred are doing back in their reality. ...Oh Merlin...this better not be one of those 'she woke up, and realized that it was all a dream...' But then again there was the Remus loving a Miley, and her Kiley looking like the Miley so I guess not (thank Merlin)
Hmm it shall be interesting to see if she tells them now... that would be slightly awkward for Sev (mwahaha) but I think she should tell them sometime, specially if she thinks she'll never get back (I still think there'll be a way...somehow...)
Oh poor James in this:
"...oh, tell him your father just died and Dumbledore gave passes to your friends to help you through the ordeal," James said
"Why is she crying?" Lily asked quietly after a couple seconds of only hearing her muffled sobs.
"Her father died today," Severus said gravelly.
"Oh my God, he really died?!?" James cried, a look of utter and complete horror flashing over his face.
Oh man thats gotta make him feel bad...
10/10Author's Response: well, i can PROMISE u tht it iz NOT a dream thingy. i h8 those 2!
yh, James can b a toe-rag sometimez.
&& u'll see about who she tellz && who she doesn't tell!!!
thnx 4 reviewin, i alwayz love readin ur reviewz!!!
:) Report Review
Wow, how exciting I honestly can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: i cant wait 2 put it up! lolz
thnx 4 readin!!! :) Report Review
Yer I LOVE those days!!! :D
CHEESE WORD!Author's Response: haha i LOVE tht! lolz i so totally have those dayz && my friendz get like terrified!!
thnx 4 readin!!! :) Report Review
oooh man this is bad news for Harry
interesting, veeery interesting
I liked the way you described Kiley and The Chase of The Werewolf, very edge-of-your-seat action :)
lol the tiara was a nice touch, funny Minnie :)
hmm i wonder when she's gonna go back and when she goes back, if any time has passed in her reality... iiinteresting happenings, I wonder if her love for Remus will change anything between her and Harry...
hmm and what 'bout her kid...
anyway, brilliant plot my friend ...though I still don't like the Remiley!!! :)
10/10Author's Response: Remiley? very funny!!! neva thought of tht!! lolz
yesh, this iz VERY bad newz 4 Harry... poor, poor Harry, poor unsuspecting Harry who isn't even born yet! :)
the suspense builds w/ each passing chapter!! wht shall the end hold 4 our characterz???
lolz thnx 4 readin!!!
uncontrollably-hyper-run-for-your-lives-if-you-value-your-sanity day!!! lol dude thats awesome!! aww and it was so sweet that her mother got the same thing :)
man she's eeever so slightly hyper!
lol i liked the 'sole mates' one, I'd never heard that! funny
the 'serious?!' 'BLACK!!' lines were so funny!! yey, i like Sirius :)
Lol with the video camera, thats gonna make some fun looking-back-on when she's sane again!
yeeah thanks for clarifying my faulty remembrances from last chappie :) good to know :)
the Lucius thingi worked well with the story...I was just too daft to work out what him knowing would mean so thanks for explaining it :)
yey! a third and fourth book! exciting!
Love AmberfireAuthor's Response: haha thankz 4 commenting!!!
i had SO much fun writin this chappie!!!
Sirius iz awesome!!
ur welcome 4 clarifyin it! :)
i cant wait 2 get 3rd && 4th up! the 4th iz gonna b kinda darker, since bad thingz happen! Addie and Scorpius r in it a lot, since by this time Kiley and Harry r married, && she'z gonna b pregnant w/ the other child! :)
Ooh a cliff-hanger!!! I MUST READ ON! GAAAHAuthor's Response: lolz thnk u 4 reading! hope u like the other chapterz! :) Report Review
"Stop thinking about pudding!" Hilarious!!Author's Response: thankz!!! i had a little help from my friend w/ tht 1!
i had originally put something different, something serious when my friend read it over, literally pushed me out of my computer chair,, deleted the sentence, and typed "stop thinking about pudding!!"
it waz awesome, yet painful @ the same time lolz :)
thnx 4 reading! Report Review
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