Reading Reviews for Tearing the Fabric of Time
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Review #1, by xrnusicx "It's your life, watcha gonna do? the world is watchin you."

10th March 2014:
She's going to change history

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Review #2, by justafan "All of my memories keep you here... inside a moment..."

13th October 2011:
great work! i really liked the story!!!it is a real cliffhanger at the end... to bad i have to do my revision for examinations now... or i would have read the whole series!!!

Author's Response: thank you so much :)

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Review #3, by Zoee "i'm going home, to the place where i belong..."

23rd May 2011:
Wow thats incredibly awkward!!!:S and just wondering Voldomort is dead in this book or not???

Author's Response: Voldemort hasn't acended to power yet :)

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Review #4, by Aleigha Grace "There's miles to go, but we both know that we'll make it.."

19th April 2011:

Author's Response: haha i'm glad u like the story :)

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Review #5, by Stormalissy "Look in my eyes. Your killing me, killing me. All i wanted was you.."

13th February 2011:
I really hope that you know that Narcissa is Sirius Black's cousin. You should have used another name and really study up on your Harry Potter history.

Author's Response: has nobody read this properly?? I clearely stated my reasoning on how this works is that Narcissa is ADOPTED. ADOPTED. ADOPTED. She is NOT RELATED to Sirius!
sorry 4 ranting, it jst annoys me greatly.

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Review #6, by andyowl "i'm going home, to the place where i belong..."

25th October 2010:
I love this and hate it at the same time!!! At first I hated the fact about the whole.Lupin.then when I was finally succumbing to him, you just had to burst her back to her real time! I can't decide which boy!

Author's Response: haha but u still love harry right? at least i hope so! :) i'm glad at least u love it as well as hate it :)

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Review #7, by Angel67 "I sense there's something in the wind..."

30th June 2010:
so it basically explains who miley is... great stories so far :D

Author's Response: thnx :) im glad u like it so far!!!

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Review #8, by stephanie bartlett "Train your fingers for battle..."

22nd March 2010:

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Review #9, by stephanie bartlett "And only surrender will help you now. I love you please see...."

22nd March 2010:

Author's Response: lolz ikr? but jst read on sweetie!!! :)

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Review #10, by stephanie bartlett "Can you feel the love tonight?"

21st March 2010:
wow!!! amazing, i luved how she staneded her ground when she was talking to the dumb #@# (lol) malfoy and omg i just love ur books!!! lolz

Author's Response: lolz thnx sweetie! :)

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Review #11, by Emma "Train your fingers for battle..."

19th March 2010:
I love your stories. Just wanted to tell you.

You do know that definibly isn't a word, though, right? I think the work you're looking for is definitely...

Author's Response: lolz yh, i figured tht out az i waz writin the 3rd book. haha
thnx 4 the review :)

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Review #12, by WeasleyGirl03 "All of my memories keep you here... inside a moment..."

14th March 2010:

Here's big fat 10/0 for you!!
I'm gonna read the next one now!

Author's Response: yay! lolz thnk u so much!!! :) :) :)

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Review #13, by WeasleyGirl03 "i'm going home, to the place where i belong..."

14th March 2010:
Wow, I loved that poor Lupin!!

I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: lolz thnx!

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Review #14, by WeasleyGirl03 "There's miles to go, but we both know that we'll make it.."

11th March 2010:
Wow that WAS unexpected :O

As usual, I loved it!!

Author's Response: thnx!! lolz i tried 2 make it tht way!!
thnx so much 4 stickin thro this series!
i've got 2 more bookz 2 go, && i rlly hope u like em enough 2 read em az i post!!! :)

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Review #15, by WeasleyGirl03 "You're drowning in your imperfection..."

10th March 2010:
Yay! A new chapter!!
I loved it, I wonder what is going to happen next? :)

Author's Response: thnx! :)
i hope u like whtz gonna happen next! i no i do! ;) lolz

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Review #16, by Amberfire "Train your fingers for battle..."

12th February 2010:
heh heh wow
I just realized this had been updated, how I missed it on the recently added list, I do not know...
hehhe nice memory :) LOOOL at how Severus just grabs Bellatrix's wand and she doesn't do anything.
The 'I-wonder-if-you-can-even-ATTEMPT-to-do-things-right' look was very funny! heh
Wow Kiley certainly let them fight it out, I kept thinking she was gonna intervene, but I guess those things needed to be said... wow if Severus ever finds out about him being Kiley's father, It's gonna be so awkward ;)

hehe 'Kiley looked back at Severus, a perplexed look on her face. Was he dying? that noise he just made sure sounded like it...' was he dying lool!

great chappie, I can't wait for the next one (hopefully this time I'll actually SEE it when it some out ;) )
I can't help but wonder what is gonna happen with Kiley when Severus marries Jasmine and has Kiley as a baby... if she's still around then... hmm... the possibilities are endless!!!
Love Amberfire

stiiill cannot get used to Remus and Kiley, tis quite sad :( where is Harry, ma boy? *sigh* poor Kiley, her life's a liiitle confuzzlecated

Author's Response: confuzzlecated omg i love it! lolz
i had a lot of fun makin this chappie! lolz
i no i couldn't get used 2 Lupin && Kiley @ 1st but then i wrote so much... lolz Harry'z gonna b like, wht the heck!??! when/if she comez back!!! ahahah!
thnx 4 readin! :)

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Review #17, by WeasleyGirl03 "Train your fingers for battle..."

10th February 2010:
Horay!!! A new chapter! I LOVED it! Miley + Lupin = baby?
It's so exciting!

Author's Response: lolz i'm glad u think so!
haha i cant wait 2 upload the next chappie!!!
thnx 4 readin && stickin w/ these bookz 4 so long! ;)

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Review #18, by ILuvSev4Evr7 "And only surrender will help you now. I love you please see...."

8th February 2010:
Great chapter but I assumed that Kiley already knew cuz Harry prob told her... Anyway, great one I'll keep reading! :)

Author's Response: i waz afraid ppl would think tht... but alas she doesn't! lolz
thnx 4 readin! :)

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Review #19, by WeasleyGirl03 "Do you know what's worth fighting for, when it's not worth dying for?"

12th January 2010:
Oh poor Kiley! That was awesome

Author's Response: lolz thankz!

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Review #20, by Amberfire "Do you know what's worth fighting for, when it's not worth dying for?"

8th January 2010:
iiinteresting memory...I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT IT IS!!
yey, exciting, a new chappie :)
awww at Kiley/Miley never being able to find her way back! Vat is dis?! I so wanna know what Harry and George and Fred are doing back in their reality. ...Oh Merlin...this better not be one of those 'she woke up, and realized that it was all a dream...' But then again there was the Remus loving a Miley, and her Kiley looking like the Miley so I guess not (thank Merlin)

Hmm it shall be interesting to see if she tells them now... that would be slightly awkward for Sev (mwahaha) but I think she should tell them sometime, specially if she thinks she'll never get back (I still think there'll be a way...somehow...)

Oh poor James in this:
"...oh, tell him your father just died and Dumbledore gave passes to your friends to help you through the ordeal," James said


"Why is she crying?" Lily asked quietly after a couple seconds of only hearing her muffled sobs.

"Her father died today," Severus said gravelly.

"Oh my God, he really died?!?" James cried, a look of utter and complete horror flashing over his face.

Oh man thats gotta make him feel bad...
Love Amberfire

Author's Response: well, i can PROMISE u tht it iz NOT a dream thingy. i h8 those 2!
yh, James can b a toe-rag sometimez.
&& u'll see about who she tellz && who she doesn't tell!!!
thnx 4 reviewin, i alwayz love readin ur reviewz!!!

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Review #21, by WeasleyGirl03 "And only surrender will help you now. I love you please see...."

2nd January 2010:
Wow, how exciting I honestly can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: i cant wait 2 put it up! lolz
thnx 4 readin!!! :)

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Review #22, by WeasleyGirl03 "It's your life, watcha gonna do? the world is watchin you."

2nd January 2010:
Yer I LOVE those days!!! :D


Author's Response: haha i LOVE tht! lolz i so totally have those dayz && my friendz get like terrified!!
thnx 4 readin!!! :)

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Review #23, by Amberfire "And only surrender will help you now. I love you please see...."

20th December 2009:
oooh man this is bad news for Harry
interesting, veeery interesting
I liked the way you described Kiley and The Chase of The Werewolf, very edge-of-your-seat action :)
lol the tiara was a nice touch, funny Minnie :)
hmm i wonder when she's gonna go back and when she goes back, if any time has passed in her reality... iiinteresting happenings, I wonder if her love for Remus will change anything between her and Harry...
hmm and what 'bout her kid...
anyway, brilliant plot my friend ...though I still don't like the Remiley!!! :)
Love Amberfire

Author's Response: Remiley? very funny!!! neva thought of tht!! lolz
yesh, this iz VERY bad newz 4 Harry... poor, poor Harry, poor unsuspecting Harry who isn't even born yet! :)
the suspense builds w/ each passing chapter!! wht shall the end hold 4 our characterz???
lolz thnx 4 readin!!!

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Review #24, by Amberfire "It's your life, watcha gonna do? the world is watchin you."

16th December 2009:
uncontrollably-hyper-run-for-your-lives-if-you-value-your-sanity day!!! lol dude thats awesome!! aww and it was so sweet that her mother got the same thing :)
man she's eeever so slightly hyper!
lol i liked the 'sole mates' one, I'd never heard that! funny
the 'serious?!' 'BLACK!!' lines were so funny!! yey, i like Sirius :)
Lol with the video camera, thats gonna make some fun looking-back-on when she's sane again!

yeeah thanks for clarifying my faulty remembrances from last chappie :) good to know :)
the Lucius thingi worked well with the story...I was just too daft to work out what him knowing would mean so thanks for explaining it :)
yey! a third and fourth book! exciting!

Love Amberfire

Author's Response: haha thankz 4 commenting!!!
i had SO much fun writin this chappie!!!
Sirius iz awesome!!
ur welcome 4 clarifyin it! :)
i cant wait 2 get 3rd && 4th up! the 4th iz gonna b kinda darker, since bad thingz happen! Addie and Scorpius r in it a lot, since by this time Kiley and Harry r married, && she'z gonna b pregnant w/ the other child! :)

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Review #25, by WeasleyGirl03 "Look in my eyes. Your killing me, killing me. All i wanted was you.."

16th December 2009:
Ooh a cliff-hanger!!! I MUST READ ON! GAAAH

Author's Response: lolz thnk u 4 reading! hope u like the other chapterz! :)

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