that was the most adorable story ever it even made me start to cry a bit Report Review
Ah! I really enjoyed this! Peace, from peace2lovepotter xxx Report Review
Well, I guess here's an added surprise, because somehow I forgot this one! And I just wouldn't feel right not reviewing it. I'm so glad I did because it was so amazingly cute! Makes me think of how I was as a little girl waiting for my dad to come home, and it really made me tear up a little. Again, great song choice... but you knew I'd say that ;)
Merry Christmas KBHG!
~VBAuthor's Response: Whoa, I totally didn't even realize you'd missed this! Huh. Well, glad you liked- FFF songs are awesome song-fic material. :D
Hope you have an amazing christmas!
-kbhg Report Review
I *sniff* I really don't know what to say...Harry is super lucky to have the kind of family he has, and he really deserves it, considering he never had much of one until now. This story really inspires me to write a "Coming Home" story as sweet as this.
I LOVE THIS SONG! So sweet. Great Job!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed this, the story and the song, and I'm glad you're inspired. :) Thanks very much for reviewing! Report Review
Very cute! I would have loved to have read more about the actual phone call, rather than just the song lyrics, but it was still very sweet. A little more description wouldn't have gone amiss, but nice work on the whole (:
xxAuthor's Response: I'm glad you liked it!!! I guess the sort of idea is that the song lyrics ARE the phone call... and a bit more detail probably would be good, maybe I'll work on that.
Thanks for reviewing!!! Report Review
Aww. This was incredibly adorable. There's something about stories involving a dad and his kids that just takes the cake on cuteness. And especially with Harry and little Lily! Honestly, this entire story just made me go 'awww'. It was really sweet. The lyrics were a nice touch and I liked how well they fitted in with the story. Good work!
EricaAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed this, and thanks for reviewing!
-kbhg Report Review
Aww! I'm not normally one for song-fics, but this is a really great use of a really sweet song. Stories based on the father-daughter dynamic are pretty rare in the land of fanfic (and the world of original fic, now I come to think about it) and so it was really nice to see such a simple, sweet and original one.
I liked your inclusion of the rest of the kids at the end too - James was perfect as the "trying to be maturer than he is" big brother, and the others were utter cuties. Again, it's amazing how much you manage to convey in so few words.
Lovely fic, and just the thing before being off to bed!Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you thought this was sweet. :)
Thank you so much for the compliments and the review! :D
-kbhg Report Review
Awe!! that was the cutest thing in the world!! it made me SMILE!! :DAuthor's Response: Yay! Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it!
I've only ever written songfics with Five For Fighting songs... they're just great story lines, y'know!???!!!
-krazyboutharryginny Report Review
awww so sweet...i love fics like this. :)Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it! Report Review
Really cute, I really like itAuthor's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing! :) Report Review
Cute story. Lots of fluff (tries pulling fluff off pants and not succeeding too well.) Your characterization of Lily was nice, and very believable.
Nicely doneAuthor's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it! :D Report Review
no matter how many times i read this i always love it. I love how you've written it and how you've got Lily's wording. I can practicall imagine this happening :)
[=Miss Ginny Potter=]Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I'm really glad you like it.
Thanksss... :D Report Review
aww, this is such a good story!!! i can't wait to read more!!!^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Unfortunately, there isn't anymore to this story... :(
Oh, well, glad you liked it! :D Report Review
I just, just love it! (lol!)
Ava xxAuthor's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Hey! I read your review for a different story and clicked on your name! I'm so glad that I did too, because I loved that! It was so cute!Author's Response: I'm really glad you thought it was cute cuz that was totally what I was going for! I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
Wow! I loved this! And the song IS amazing. (: The story was really really sweet. (:Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it! Five For Fighting is the most amazing guy ever! Report Review
I love it! So touching! And I love the characteristics you gave all of them, James, and Lily, and the sweet meeting with Ginny. Love it! I shall have to go read more now.
The KeyAuthor's Response: YAY!!! Touching is exactly what I was going for!!!
;) Report Review
SO FREAKING ADORABLE~ Loved it! PLZ write more, I beg you! *Claps and tons of cookies* -CharlyAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really glad you liked it. Report Review
Very good story.
Nearly brought tears to my eyes.
I need to look at a picture of my grand daughter now.
I hope she loves Harry Potter stories as much as I do.
I will save your story for her until she's old enough to read.
GHAuthor's Response: Wow, I am so, so flattered. I'm so glad you liked it. You should listen to the song, too. It's so beautiful!
-Krazyboutharryginny Report Review
Terms of Service
categories & genres
short story collection