There's a few spelling mistake..
This is beautiful seriously..
I'm almost in tears..

Author's Response: Sorry about them. I'll go back over the story in a minute and try to correct them :)
Thankyou soo much!
-Bx

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Wow! That was a great story. I loved it. I think you did a good thing by not including dialogue, it gave room for the emotion that Rose and Scorpius were feeling. I'm a sucker for a good romance, and that made me melt. So good! Great job! Only a few grammar mistakes. 9/10. :)

~lovelyinsane

Author's Response: Aw, thankyou, you're so lovely!
And yes, I know, I do need to try to work on grammar:) Thanks again,
Dee, x

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Your spelling may be rubbish my dear but your writing certainly is not!

This is a fantastic one shot and I applaud you for being able to capture the heartbreak of the both of them, something that is usually difficult to do.

Keep writing, you are great at it!

Author's Response: Thankyou so much! That is such a lovely review :)
-Bx

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Aw that was so sweet! And totally believable! Great job!

Author's Response: Thankyou:)
-Bx

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I like this. The song works really well with the text of the story.

Author's Response: Thankyou:)
-Bx

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1. a peice of his heart.

2. heart now lay in peices

3. like each one was pecious to her.

Spell check alert! 1. and 2. the "i" and the "e" need to be switched; i before e except after c. And 3. is that supposed to be precious? Or something else?

But aside from my obsessive spelling problems (xD) it was a wonderful chapter! Very nicely written. I hope to read more of your works!

You, ah, have a very interesting user name. It's not one of the common ones. And actually it's one of the things that made me randomly pick you from the people online. It's a habit of mine, to look over who's online and read their story and leave a review. :) Spreading the reviews about, and reading some very good fanfictions.

The Key

Author's Response: Ha, Thanks, I never have been too great at spelling(:
&Thankyou for the comment about the chapter and the name:D
-Bx

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A happy ending after all (well...happy-ish, if they're families get over themselves)
This was sweet =] and there were some really nice bits of writing
I like it, good song fic
spam_up_sam

Author's Response: Thankyou(:

-Bx

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