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Review #1, by BambiScott Motherhood

16th January 2012:
aw I love Bill/Fleur and their little family!

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Review #2, by leannemariesnape Motherhood

20th May 2011:
Hi! leannemariesnape with your review!

I really liked your chapter image... It is very pretty :)
So, I really liked how Bill and Fleur were not used to having such a quiet baby... I thought you characterised the children very well. The dialogue was very good. I thought it was a nice touch that the two girls seemed to have some very Veela-ish characteristics. I thought it was a nice touch that she thought about her Dad and how he never said anything to Fleur about raising Veelas.
It was also a good touch with Bill, and the insomnia of Fleur, and it was also good to have Fleur's accent throughout, making it seem all the more canon.
I can't reallt see any problems with this...
A good, enjoyable, thoughtful fic :)

Leanne

Author's Response: Yeah, it has always been a pet peeve of mine when Fleur suddenly becomes completely British, especially when we see her with that thick accent.

As the child of foreign parents, I can tell you those accents do not go away, no matter how much time you spend in another country.


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Review #3, by Aderyn Motherhood

28th December 2010:
Hi, Aderyn here for your review.

This is a very nice oneshot. A lot of people skip from writing about newly wed Bill and Fleur to writing about their children, so it's nice to see the in-between. The writing feels sort of slow, but in this cause, it's nice, almost calming. Even though there is some argument, it's a generally upbeat and reflective story.

You have some really nice moment, like the part where Fleur explains her arguing to her daughters- so cute! And I'm very impressed that you managed to keep Fleur's accent up the whole time.

Author's Response: Yeah, it's always a pet peeve of mine when Fleur is suddenly perfectly British in stories, so I wrote this story to practice Fleur's accent.

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Review #4, by missmasquerade Motherhood

2nd August 2010:
This was such a refreshing read. I never really gave much thought to the motherly side of Fleur. I think I always saw her as the prom queen, pretty girl, you know? I like this side of her, because it just makes sense. This was amazing, and you're a wonderful writer! (: Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words (and hopes maybe you'll direct some more towards the other stories).

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Review #5, by ronhermione4evr Motherhood

30th July 2010:
This was such a sweet, fluffy, and cute one-shot that it almost brought me to tears. I loved Fleur's characterization in this, and Bill seems like the gentle, caring father. 10/10!
-ronhermione4evr

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, and I hope you can be persuaded to maybe take a peek at some of my other stories too.

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Review #6, by Harry and Ginny Motherhood

27th January 2010:
cute fic this one. i liked it.^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, and I hope you will look in on some of my other oneshots.

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