Oh my god, this was amazing! I love overprotectiveness, especially with siblings, and this one just made me want to keep reading! I loved it!
100/10.
~GP87

Author's Response: Well thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Sibling over-protectiveness is a territory I am quite familiar with. XD

Thank you for the review!

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Hi Zinny and Merry Christmas from Secret Santa!

I have three brothers of my own so this was quite amusing for me. I'm also a firm believer in the sanctity of the better brother position :-)

'quadruple pinky promise me with a super-secret sign-off'
Holy cow I laughed at that.

~Ty

Author's Response: Hello Ty! Thanks so much for stopping by for these lovely reviews :)

I've only actually got one brother, but his best friends are essentially brothers to me as well. Naturally, I'm no stranger to over-protective boys xD

So glad you liked it, lovely! Thanks so much and Merry Christmas!

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James is such a softie :) The "cap'n" part was a little much, but other than that I really like it!

Author's Response: Haha yep, he really is! A little much? I'm not quite sure what you mean, but thank you nonetheless for your review!

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perfect one shot, i absolutely loved it! you captured the characters perfectly!
James2009

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you think so. This was insanely entertaining to write. ^__^

- Zinny

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