sorry i didnt review earlier i just couldnt stop reading to pause and
write a review... this is an amazing story! when's the next chapter
coming up? cant wait :)

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oh god!
when will you update!?

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Please please please please please write more!

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this is soo cute

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loved that chapter. Rose And Scorpius are so odd.
update quickly.

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***nominate for dobby!***
really good story...please go on writing!
i just love rose and scorpius!

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oh please write! I'm waiting for chapter 17 and it seems like I've been waiting forever!!

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Oh Hell!! Come on, it's been months and months. I hope you're safe and well and that the only reason for your absence is writers block or something mundane.

Post a note on they homepage so we don't worry about you. Thanks

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please please continue writing!!
i LOVE the way you write
and i LOVE the plot...so please please please update!!!
and soon!
I'm dying to read more...really! :)
fantastic stuff!

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please continue with this story! :)
i adore scorpious and rose :')

thankyouthankyouthankyou! :D

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write more! write more! write more!!!

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so ive just read your entire story. its fantastic.
just a few notes that might bring your story up to that top top tier. the amount of time it took for them to go from hate to love was too quick but the amount of time spent in denial was too long.
love the whole equalizers plot
good dialog
perhaps spend more time on funny anecdotes.
you seem to rely a little too heavily on the truth game for a lot of the plot
spend a little more time in describing the mood or atmosphere by taking into account non dialog elements like costume ( clothing), setting and sound effects.
you spend an adequate amount on description but, for example, in the weasely house, great idea, but the sleeping arrangement seemed vague. a funny uncle george or son's anecdote would have been nice- prank wise. essentially, beef up your chapters. you have a good plot basis and write eloquently. either up the 'funny witty banter' or just add meat to your story and your story will be top notch. A solid set of vocabulary doesn't harm either. :) just a few suggestions from a literary POV
lovely idealovely plot. well written. definitely up there.
cheers

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e-e-e-e-ek!

oh. my. goodness. that was amazing. i've been waiting for that moment where they finally declared how much they love each other and NOW HERE IT IS!

as usual, fantastic characterization! scorpius and rose act exactly as i thought they would if they were in ... that sort of position *cough cough* ;)

update, update, update! :)

xx

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The first chapter was a real attention grabber! I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and holy hell, I'll be SO disappointed if this story remains a WIP.

Thanks for sharing.

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.. so... adorable. I'm seriously trying to resist the urge to squeal right now. XDDD I'm so glad they finally got together! That UST was driving me crazy. Scorpius is so, so, so sweet. I love him and Rose.

Thanks so much for writing this story! I really love it. :)

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This story is frickin fantastico. Thought you ought to know.

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I LOVE THIS STORY, it is adorable.

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There are not enough adjectives to describe how much I LOVE YOUR STORY. Seriously it is Amazing and wonderful and spectacular and extraordinary and if I do say so myself...Magical =)
It twists and turns and zigs and zags. Keep it up! I love it!

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They've only just gotten together and they're already fighting. Haha! What else to expect right? It took them long enough to confess.

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love it, just love it :D

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OHMIGOD!
1) FINALLY they told each other. They are so adorable together as a couple.
2) This resistance movement sounds epic! It's so sweet how Scorius doesn't want Rose to go.
3) When is the prologue going to happen? I hope this story doesn't have a sad ending!

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Yes, yes, yes, yes yes yes yes!!! Ah yay! FINALLY! I am so so excited for this chapter! And that was such a great way for them to get together! I loved it so so much. I don't think I was expecting this for another couple of chapters, so it was a very welcome surprise!!
Great job!
:)BaletGir

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"Love you"
"I know."

Did you SERIOUSLY use that line?
Anyway... Made my day. It's like FINALLY. Some parts were cheesey while some were amazing. Can't wait for more though :D

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Absoutley love your story!! Can't wait to read what happens next! :)

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FINALLY!.goddd i thought they would never tell each other... good chapter by the way :D

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