I cried. I actually cried at the end of last chapter when Al found out that Blake was his. And part way through this chapter. And I've stayed til 2.30 in the morning to read thism so get your arse working and churn out the next chapter to make me melt as quickly as you can. Report Review
YOU NEED TO NEED TO NEED TO UPDATE. YOU CAN'T SEE IT BUT I'M DOWN ON MY KNEES BEGGING YOU. PLEASE. Report Review
upppdaaattte now! :) Report Review
More please. Pleasey please. I need more blake and adele and albus and james. Pwease :3 Report Review
IT'S BEEN A YEAR! HUHUHUHUHU Report Review
OH. MY. GOD. I laughed so hard this entire chapter!! It was hilarious and I definitely thought it was epic in its own way. Love this story so far!! Report Review
Oh, I wanna know what happen next.
It's saddening that Al didn't love Adele any more :(
I hope you could update soon! Will be waiting~ Please Oh Please~~~ Report Review
This is a brilliant, engrossing and funny chapter! The characters are relatable and humourous, the whole plot is original and well played out - giving some, but not all the information away to keep the reader reading - and the lovely thoughts and rambles that make this such a unique and funny story. The characters are well developed, witty and likable - I love the character of Adele as she seems feisty, clever and funny. The whole idea of the debt and stuff is original and inventive too.The structure is neat and very easy to follow, and the clever style you write in is easy to read and humorous.
I'm looking forward to reading the rest, as it's hilarious! Well done :) Report Review
Seriously, a bit saddening that Al was not wearing the wedding ring. :( I hope, they get together, pity Blake for having idiots for parents. haha, sorry.
Thanks by the way, the story is very addicting :D
Hope, you could update soon, will be waiting!! Report Review
Update soon~! PLEASE!! I love your work :) Thanks. Report Review
gahh please write more! Report Review
i love deja vu its sooo awesome i love how u mixed the stories! but wat bout james u'd think al wld recognize lol ;p Report Review
I'm a sobbing mess right now.. this story is so addictive!! Pretty pretty please tell me that there's more and that you'll update soon or I'll go mad.. honestly, you are an amazing writer.. Report Review
I just wanted to ask if the story is over? Because it was so addictive that, I was literally hyperventilating at certain parts. And I do hope it didn't end like this, because the end doesn't really make much sense. Report Review
that can't be it..
PLEASE TELL ME THERE'S MORE Report Review
I never write reviews--i know its terrible but i had to say it. I LOVE THIS STORY MORE THAN WORDS CAN DESCRIBE AND CANT WAIT FOR YOU TO UPDATE I MIGHT DIE IF YOU DONT THIS IS SO PERFECT OK AH IM DONE Report Review
it's a very good story.but perhaps in next chapter you can add that albus should be mad at rose and scor for helping Adele to hide his son from him.and as should be the family for hiding there nephew grandson from them.Adele shouldn't be forgiven easily by al or his family..
and please update soon Report Review
Ok *breathe in breathe out breathe in breathe out*
Ok freakout moment officially over...holy crap i think i just did a happy dance!!! Eh, im cool with it
i love this story...and all your others too
And ive read them all like five times over
And im in dire need of a review
CAUSE I AM JUST CONVULSING FROM ITS PURE AWESOMENESS
they are just amazing, positively, completelly brilliant
I know life gets in the way alot (It tends to do that and its just so maddening isnt it) im currently procrastinating at the moment and i will seriously regret it later but i had to leave a review (first review ever!!! :D) but whenever you are free, think about your lovely dedicated readers out there an know that they lovvveee your stories and wish for them to continue, cause no one can write them like you ;)
Absolute sheer genius
Also, i think it would be impossible for me to leave favorite quotes CAUSE I LOVE THE WHOLE FREAKING THING AAAHHH ITS SO AMAZING!!!
Ok im done now :) have fun and keep letting us know your alive (or just update till the stories finish, cause, you know, that always works too, but your choice)
On of your lovely dedicated readers who adore your stories cause they are just amazing like that...i will stop babbling now...:D Report Review
I have already commented on chapter 22, so I has to wrote it here: PLEASE WRITE A NEW CHAPTER, IT'S BEEN SO LONG! I nerd you, I can't wait, please don't stop writing!! :O Report Review
Please update :,( I will be ever so sad if u don't. This story is AMAZING Report Review
Hello! I really like this story and your other stories generally. You write really well because your funny and engaging at the same time. I love the characters in your story and Blake is so adorable! When I get older and if I have kids, Blake would be the perfect child (just saying) :P
When I read the first chapter of this story, I didn't think it would end up in the place it is now but I still like the path you have taken and can't wait to see what happens next. What will be the Potter family's reaction?! PLEASE UPDATE!
Thanks for writing this awesome story and keep writing :D Report Review
YOU ARE KILLING ME WOMAN. SERIOUSLY. I love this story, it's my favourite one on here but you don't update! I know you say you're on a possibly permanent hiatus, but could you possibly make is less permanent, at least to update this amazing story :D And this chapter, gah, it's Blake finally meeting his (idiot) daddy, and I want to see if Al and Addie end up back together!! PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE! I know you probably have a life but please, put that to the side and update, for the many fans of this fic :) Report Review
Wow. Talk about drama! Love it, please write more soon x Report Review
Oh my goodness, I LOVE your story! Sarcastic humor gets me every time :) Please update soon! Thanks so much for a great read. Report Review
NO TIME TO REVIEW. MUST READ THE NEXT CHAPTER. Report Review
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