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Review #1, by vespasian68967 Chapter One

29th July 2013:
Very nice. I'm sure some would say it's predictable and too fluffy, but I don't find that to be a bad thing. :)

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Review #2, by Gal22 Chapter One

15th November 2009:
That was great. 10/10

Author's Response: Aw. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Review #3, by Lostaroundlondon Chapter One

7th November 2009:
WOW. that was really good. I love how there's a sense of mystery about the guy. Its a really cute story. The way you portrayed Lily was interesting too - sometimes authors make Lily and spoiled little princess, but they way you described her is the way I think she would be. Well done!

Author's Response: Oh! I am extremely glad that you enjoyed this so much! I loved writing it.

There's most definitely mystery about this guy...and there's supposed to be. He doesn't need a name or a description; the point was to make him universal, make him real. I hope I managed to do that.

I don't think Lily Potter II is a spoiled princess and I wanted to make it clear in this story how she is as normal and real as anyone else. It's good to hear that you felt I characterised her well.

Thanks so much for your wonderful review. It made my day!

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Review #4, by ange Chapter One

8th October 2009:
loved it :)
very cutee

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :)

Thanks for the review.

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Review #5, by SweetSerendipity Chapter One

7th October 2009:
so who's the guy in this one supposed to be?

Author's Response: Ah, such an interesting question.

He has no name, no face, and no identity other than the fact that he is Lily Luna Potter's best friend of fifteen years, he doesn't along with Al Potter, his parents are famous, and he is hopelessly in love with Lily. He is, simply, just an OC.

Now, if you'd like to imagine him as someone, think of him as Oliver Wood's son. That's who I thought of. You can kind of get that when I mention that his parents are famous Quidditch players. I never gave him a name in my head, or on paper, so it's up to you.

Thanks so much for reviewing. I really appreciate it!

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