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Review #1, by Dracos_Girl_Hermione yummy ...

2nd September 2010:
Thats was good! like are so good...hope you write more :)

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Review #2, by nightengale yummy ...

4th August 2010:
I like it but I am not in love with it... I am interested in the next part but this didn't leave me begging for more

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Review #3, by sam yummy ...

21st June 2010:
horriblew grammer!! very difficult 2 read

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Review #4, by AussieAnatomy627 yummy ...

2nd November 2009:
I like the idea but the spelling mistakes are a little distracting. The plot is good though.

Author's Response: thank you :) I know I'm really bad at it.

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Review #5, by baletgir yummy ...

12th October 2009:
Interesting. The grammar and spelling that you mentioned in your author note, seem to be typos and not just bad spelling. If you write you fic in a word processor program on your computer it will fix a lot of that for you and that will make your story easier to read. I think you could add a few more details here and there and work on the flow of your writing. Also this fic is listed as a one-shot and completed, yet at the end of the chapter you said to be continued. Just wanted to point it out to you.

Author's Response: i meant to be contiued in another one shot or short story :) ... thanks for the review x

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Review #6, by Lord Sophiemort yummy ...

7th October 2009:
Hi there!

This was very sweet. A nice little read. :)

I just thought I'd point this out to you...

"thoughs steely blue eyes. thoughs perfect looks. that blonde hair."

'thoughs' is spelt 'those'. :D

Enough of that, though. Very well done - as I said, it was a very sweet read.

And thank you again for the review!


Author's Response: :) im rubbish at spelling and thank you, i have edited it so it abit longer :) . byee x

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Review #7, by Amanda. yummy ...

6th October 2009:
Cute, you should check out my dramoine. Falling Victory :). I'm not actually a supporter, but I find it cute anyhoo. Good job. If you google a writing helper they have a really good one, although I cannot remember the name. Good start though (:.

Author's Response: thanks alot i will do XD

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