lol, could still be tweaked a bit more, just to make it run more smoothly, but a good idea overall.

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haha this was really cute. i especially liked the ending :D
james and lily are so adorable. i love it!

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Aw, I completely adored this. Seriously, it was so adoarable and funny and cute and, just, AW!

LOVED when James was all freaking out about the apocalypse and how he got so paranoid over her calling him by his first name. So fuuny and adorable and characterizations were wonderful and I just loved it!

Squid

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awww

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"Shut up, Furball."

"Shut up, mutt."

"HERE I AM! JUST HIT ME NOW!"


Ah, I loved this. C'est incroyable! Fantastique!

An amazing sequel.

Bravo, bravo, bravo to you.

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Hahaha! that was hilarious and cute!! Great great job!!

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haha.

"What?! STOP CALLING ME THAT! IT'S WEIRD!"

oh gosh. i can practically imagine hm squirming and everything like a litle child. i thank he's gone insane. not to mention that awesome banner, he's all scruffly and stubbley. it's yummy.

we'll call him Isane!James, i love him. (:

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Really reAlly REALLY reALLY good work! it was so funny! its cute how unsure of himself James is... lol and his ranting about the world ending was funny too :D

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this is incredibly cute :) i love both their forms of "revenge". and James just sounds so confused!
i really love how you've written it. because every set of l/j revenge is always so brutal to one of them, but this has made it so light hearted and sweet.
i love it!
10/10

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