Very cute! I loved it! Report Review
That was interesting. I like your overall idea and story line, but honestly it felt as if something was missing. I did enjoy reading it, just I felt the ending to be a bit abrupt. Also Ginny seemed a bit OOC. In my opinion she wouldn't get back together with Harry so quickly and I think they would really need to talk about everything especially him seeing her before going into the forest. I think what you have is a great start, but maybe all you need is to build on it.
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WOW, I was sitting here reading this and just laughing so hard... I absolutely love it, it's great, wonderful job!Author's Response: Thank you, I try :P Report Review
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