Wonderful story! Completely Love it!
just one thing...you could have ended it on a bit of a happier note-perhaps them going back to the common room and their freinds receiving them...,
but on the whole MAGNIFIQUE! kepp writing! Report Review
that was adorable! (:Author's Response: thank you so much for leaving a review :] Report Review
soo fluffy and sweet!
loved it!Author's Response: thank you!! :]
AW! that was so adorable! sorry I couldn't resist! It was a great one-shot! i added it to my favs!
JillianAuthor's Response: aww thank you so much for reviewing and for the sweet comment :]
aweee that was so sweeet amazing i loveddd itAuthor's Response: love you for reviewing :]
thank you! Report Review
I loved it!
It was great!
Happily ever after...
Until, the Dark Lord.
I loved the last two paragraphs!
"Then he kissed her. And it was all he'd ever imagined. Even better than he'd imagined. She tasted so sweet against his lips. His arms curled around her neck and to the back of her head, his fingers twirling around her bright red hair. Then he felt her hands curl around his own neck and his heart could have bursted with happiness.
And when she started to cry, he kissed each of the fallen tears away."Author's Response: aww thank you so much, i really appreciate it :]
i loved your story=DAuthor's Response: thank you!! :) Report Review
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