I think there's a problem with HPFF or something, b/c it won't show up my name even though I'm signed in. *scratches head in confusion* No idea why.
Anyway, I really loved this piece!! Daresay it is my favourite of the requested reviews!
Rosie is a very comical character, and how I wish we could see more of her -- but alas, she is a muggle. I guess I'll have to wait till the Christmas break!lol. I like her so much that I'm almost rooting for Rosie/Teddy.
I'm unsure of whether I like Lyra or not. She seems a little snobby, but I'm sure I'll get used to it. I also wonder whether she'll become a Sue, which she doesn't seem to be now, but I wonder. Hopefully, you'll keep her the way she is :) Not a funny, beautiful, smart goddess!haha.
I loved Teddy, and his banter with Lyra was very entertaining.
I've never seen him portrayed like that, but I do like it.
Do keep writing, it's a good piece! I felt so sorry for Lyra at the end -- but it shows, prejudice isn't just on Lya's side of things.
Good story, keep going!
xCNxAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for such a wonderful review! I have to admit, I started off wanting Rosie to be enthusiastic (almost to the point of annoying) about Hogwarts and magic and stuff, and by the end of the chapter I, too, loved her character. And although Lyra may seem a little snobby and annoying right now, remember that she is taking a muggle to platform 9 3/4 - where any of her parents' friends could see - and she is far too stressed out to see the lighter side of things! I'm glad you liked Teddy's character, too. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE REVIEW! So fast, too.
Okay, I'll stop babbling now. Thank you! Report Review
Michelle from the forums here!
Hmm.love the characterizations, they were spot on.
Lyra's character is interesting. The pure-blood upbringing kind of background that you've introduced is great, and you've pulled it off nicely.
Overall, I think it was brilliant!
Peace, love, and cauldron cakes,
MichelleAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)
It's nice to see a Teddy/OC story as mostly it's Teddy/Victoire story. Not that I hate it, it's just nice to see a change once in a while :)
Nott, well, I can imagine why her father might not favor her introducing the wizarding world to a muggle. So, with Teddy Lupin comes inside the picture, things should get interesting soon enough. Phew, she should have it quite hard to carry the name.
Sorry for the randomness, and until the next chapter, that is :)Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! It means a lot :) I guess I just wanted to try something different - like you say, there are a lot of Teddy/Victoire stories around! Report Review
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