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Review #1, by PotBottom Chapter #1: Familiar Strangers

26th October 2009:
Interested, waiting for more. Update fast and furious, since you're chapters are short

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Review #2, by Nynfadora Chapter #1: Familiar Strangers

19th October 2009:
i realy like it, people don't seem to understand the REAL feelings you get when someone dies, it hurts so much and theirs nothing you can do. You now other people are sad to but you get so wrapped up in your own thoughts you dont see this. Also the guilt thing is another thing for you to explore :)
Really nce style... the one and ONLY thing i would say to improve on is the thought... thing. Instad you could say:
Harry's thoughts drifted to when he was six years old (etc etc!)

Really good:)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad someone likes my story!!! :) I hope I can count on your reading soon... haha. Thanks for your suggestion, I'll try to take it into account.

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