Okay, I'm going to point this out as it's really bugging me. Some of the words have been replaced with other words. Like "ass" has been replaced to "eyebrow", "face" has been replaced to "purse", "eyes" has been replaced to "puppies", "girls" to "bunny rabbits", "boys" to "frogs", "wand" to "banana" and "voice" to "underwears".
I first thought it was my fault and maybe I changed it like that, but I can't find out how I could have. I noticed like 2-3 chapters ago and checked the reviews, but no one had commented on it. Now I don't know if this is some sort of joke I'm missing on or not. I'm really sorry for pointing this out, because I feel like a total female dog for doing so, but I just thought you should know.
Besides that, I'm really enjoying your story so far! I really love each and every character, and Russel? Turns out there's more to him than that meets the eye. I really can't wait for more Georgie/James action soon. 10/10
P.S - Sorry if I sounded really mean and all! Report Review
You can't leave me hanging I need more post a sequel or more chapters anything I need more Report Review
So I am extremely new to this world of fan fiction, meaning I have no idea who really reads these reviews but I really just have to say that this story is fantastic. Like I said I'm new, meaning I have only read a few stories so far and fortunately the ones that I have read have been pretty good. The thing about this story (and wolfsbane too, I read that first) is that not only is it well written, and do you fall in love with the characters, I honestly had arguments with myself whether I liked Charisma or Georgie better (it helped picturing them both as Taylor swift...) but the best part of these stories is the plot. While the other fan fictions have been great and often tell the woes of a teenage relationship (I am reading in the romance genre though) , wolfsbane and an object of interest managed to capture this perfectly while providing an exciting plot line. Honestly an object of interest is such an interesting idea, anything could happen with it. Like I said I have no idea who will read this, but if its someone considering the story then I hope I convince you to start. If its the author (don't know your name, sorry) then thank you so much, and I have my fingers crossed that you are able to get somewhere with your talent. Report Review
Awesome chapter! Have a Mars Bar! ; ) Report Review
This is an interesting/amazing/lovely/brilliant story. 10/10. Report Review
THE COLOUR OF HIS EYES IS HAZEL! Report Review
This was absolutely one of the most interesting stories I have read here. Really, I loved that you didn't leave it at the middle and kept on going with her past. Absolutely captivating!!
Also, the ending, I love it. I love it when some things (or in this case a lot of things) are left untold and we, the readers, can only use our good ol' imagination to go on with the story.
It's not the first story from you that I have read, they have all been really really really good. Words are not enough :)Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this story, and also that you liked the ending! We share the same opinion when it comes to things left untold :)
I couldn't just leave Georgie's past untold though, and so I tried to develop that aspect.
Thank you again, you're very kind! Report Review
Aw, I loved this story. I think it's my favorite one of yours. Beautifully done :)Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! :) Report Review
I'd date James, he's so sweet! :)Author's Response: Thank you for the review! James is a sweetie :) Report Review
Ah! Loved this to death! Please write a sequel, you left off at the perfect place for one.Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad that you enjoyed this story! I loved writing it! :)
As for the sequel, I'm afraid that I don't have the time to write one at the moment, maybe one day, but not at the moment. But I'm glad that know that the interest is there! Report Review
Great chapter. Loved it. 9/10 : )Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad that you enjoyed it, and I hope that you like the rest! :) Report Review
I loved the bit at the lake 9/10 : )Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I really like writing scenes about the lake for some reason! :) Report Review
Hate tammy. Kevin seems nice. 9/10 :Author's Response: Haha, Tammy isn't the nicest of characters, but I'm glad that you like Kevin; I like his character too! :)
Thank you again. Report Review
Ohh is something foing to happen between molly and russel 9/10 : )Author's Response: Maybe, maybe not :)
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I knew josh was going to ask georgie 9/10 : )Author's Response: Thank you for the review! :) Report Review
Freddy and mcgonagal definatly. Haha great chapter 9/10 : )Author's Response: Haha, thank you! :D
I hope you enjoy the rest as much! Report Review
We havent seen much of al lately. 9/10 : )Author's Response: Yeah, I'ma afraid that Al doesn't really make too much of an appearance in this story, only in a few chapters! But thank you for the review! :) Report Review
Should we trust josh? He seems alright... 9/10 : )Author's Response: You'll have to make up your own mind for that, but thank you for the review! :D Report Review
James sounds hot. 9/10 : )Author's Response: Haha, I like to imagine him as such! ;)
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Great start. Loved it 9/10 : )Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review! I'm glad that you're enjoying this! :D Report Review
Russ he's so freaking cute its ridicukulasAuthor's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad that you like him! :) Report Review
Excellent story all along. I'm sure someones mentioned this but where it ought to say Aurors it says auroras. You might want to change that... Anyway, brilliant peice of writing- thoroughly entrancing.Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review! I'm glad that you're enjoying this.
It has been mentioned, yes :P I had planned to do a big edit on this story, and thought I'd change it all then (because there are a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes and a few continuity mistakes too) but I haven't had time to go about it yet.
Thank you again! I really am pleased that you've enjoyed this! :) Report Review
You lost me in the last two chapters...It was SOOO good and then bleh and confusing. Sorry.Author's Response: You don't have to apologise, but I'm sorry to hear that you're not enjoying it any more. My stories aren't for everyone, but thank you for giving it a chance! I have improved a lot since writing this - I like to think so anyway.
Thank you for the review. :) Report Review
What's with the time moving around so much? Goes from class to one in the morning?? It's very in consistent and confusing...Author's Response: I'm sorry that you feel that way :)
I have re-read this chapter, and I'm not too sure what you mean; it's all set in one consistent line of events - if that makes sense.
But thank you for the review! Report Review
THAT'S THE END? OH MY GOSH. why? why-oh-why? please tell me there's a sequel? please?Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm afraid that's it for Georgie and James. If I'm honest I did have a plan for the sequel, but I don't have the time to write it! Maybe one day, I might write something similar, but until then ... thank you again! :) Report Review
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