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Review #1, by keroberros Revelations

7th November 2009:
It's a shame it doesn't go on for longer as I'd love to read Hugo's reaction. There were some grammar issues so maybe get someone to beta your next one??? Just an idea but loved it anyways.

B x

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Review #2, by keroberros Discovery

7th November 2009:
Hey I really like this idea. Be interesting to see how this pans out although not sure about the kids names??? no offence but loved the rest.

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Review #3, by baletgir Revelations

12th October 2009:
I like you idea for this fic. I think you need to concentrate on details a bit more when you write, though. I have the same problem, I imagine something and then forget that a reader has no clue and I have to pretty much spell it out for them so they understand what I wanted the story to be. Also this is listed as a one-shot, yet it has two chapters, maybe you should change it to a short story, that way you will get more readers because they are looking for something with a few chapters. Just a suggestion.
:)BaletGir

Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestions, its good to get some ideas and feedback so i know if i need to change anything! I think i will change it to a short story.

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Review #4, by spam_up_sam Revelations

10th October 2009:
Aw gosh, I really loved that.
I'm glad Hermione was there as well to keep Ron in check and that everything went so well. It was so sweet.
I wish there was more though, I would love to see Hugo and Al's reaction! Now that would interesting lol
Very good first fic, you should be proud =]
spam_up_sam

Author's Response: thank you sooo much! I'm really pleased you like it. i have been thinking about writing a sequel about the Weasley/Malfoy family reactions. I'll keep you posted!

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Review #5, by Pamela Discovery

6th October 2009:
I like the life they've built together. I hope Ron doesn't ruin it.

Author's Response: You'll have to read and find up, next chapters up asap. Thanks for the review! : )

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Review #6, by spam_up_sam Discovery

5th October 2009:
Oo! I likeee!
What will Ron Do? Will they run again? So many questions dear!
This is a really unique plot, at least, I've yet to read anything along the same lines before. But yeah, I'm interested to where you'll go with this.
I hope you update soon =]
spam_up_sam

Author's Response: Then next chapters up but still needs to b validated (apparently it is waiting?!?). Thanks for the great review!

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