3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by WitnesstoitAll Snape's Desire- I show not your face but your hearts desire

17th October 2009:
Hello!! Great Entry... Snape is always a wonderful character and it was lovely to see your version of what he sees in the Mirror of Erised. Be sure to check out my latest blog for the winners of the challenge!!

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Review #2, by essenni Snape's Desire- I show not your face but your hearts desire

5th October 2009:
I believe Snape would feel more emotion when seeing Lily. He would be overcome by grief, regret, love, despair and you had to describe it. The story is a bit messy, you should reread it and capitalize letters.

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Review #3, by lilyandjamesfan Snape's Desire- I show not your face but your hearts desire

2nd October 2009:
I really like how you have both Harry and Snape looking into the mirror and seeing what they could have had. I like how you have the mirror-Lily approving of Snape's actions through her smile. i think its a good little one-shot.

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