Hi! I liked this a lot! Nextgen is so much fun to write, isn't it? I love the character you picked for this. I've seen a lot of children, but never have I seen a Lestrange. It's definitely going to help make your story stand out! My one issue with this was the spelling and grammar. There were quite a few errors, which just took away from the story as a whole. But its nothing a quick read through won't fix! Albus's character is shaping up well. It's really great that I can tell so much about his character from just a 500 word piece. It really speaks highly of you as an author. Once again, this was great! -NaidatheRavenclaw, Ravenclaw Report Review
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