5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MaggieJezebelWeasley A Kind Thomas And Overloading Homework.

1st June 2011:
Love it!!! :D Next chapter! Great job!

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Review #2, by Unwrittenangle A Kind Thomas And Overloading Homework.

22nd December 2010:
Great Start, keep writing!!!

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Review #3, by prongsie4ever A Kind Thomas And Overloading Homework.

3rd October 2009:
oh poor rose. i hope she and scorpius go out soon. and is rose ever going to tell scorpius about the baby, and what will her parents say. can't wait to read more

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review progsie4ever. You're so kind. Chapter 3 will be up in no time!!

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Review #4, by Burnt Cheese The Train Trip Back Home.

2nd October 2009:
I thought it was rather likeable, but you need to work on your writing a tad. Is English your first language? :D There's a few spelling and grammar mistakes scattered here and there, nothing a good beta won't fix, though. The plot is okay, though a little cliche and overused (have you read Delicate?) Good effort, though. Oh, and more descriptions would be good.

Author's Response: I am still working on the gramatical side of writing. Thank you so much for the review. I'll try better next time.

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Review #5, by prongsie4ever The Train Trip Back Home.

2nd October 2009:
this tory is so funny. i wonder if rose is going to tell scorpius that it's his baby. i can't wait to find out.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much. I still don't know how everyone is going to find out about the baby. Thanks again.

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