ohhh... poor Colin. I wondered a little about him, because you know, it just says Oliver Wood and Neville were carrying him in. But, maybe I'm slow, but who killed him?
'The Death Eater was grinning triumphantly, letting his tongue slide over his front teeth.'
AHh what a line! That Death Eater is soo Evil then. It's like shiver.
I guess I'm actually trying to say it's a good story so I like it-but I don't, you know? Because everything goes wrong. I think my mind has left me. Let's just say I like it... :)
Totally insane, yes.Author's Response: I did too wonder. And then I got the chance with kind of competition on a small site and took it. I always had a soft spot for Colin so I loved writing this, showing his brave side. A little sad, but also meant to show that everyone has their part to play. Thanks for the review! Report Review
This is great. Colin is often an overlooked character. It's really just a nice story.Author's Response: He is, which is why I choose him. I like him even though he's slightly annoying :P Thanks for the review! Report Review
Wow. This was...actually pretty incredible writing. There's this stereotype that some people have about the houses, that all Gryffindors are recklessly foolishly brave, that Hufflepuffs are just your average Joe's, that Ravenclaws are the next geniuses, and that Slytherins are creepers. But, this one-shot, it showed exactly what they're meant to be. And Colin was always one of my favorite characters-I hated his death. And you did an amazing job with his final battle and death. Well done! 10/10Author's Response: And it was the point of it. Colin is made a fool of by many, which is why I picked him, to show another side of him :P I hated his death too. Thanks a lot for your amazing review! Report Review
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