This is a really good story, it's funny and it all comes together. Keep writing more chapters because i'm anxious to read more of it

Author's Response: I have off from school tomorrow...I'll probably start writing this fic again. It's been awhile...at least a year. I almost abandoned it, but you've changed my mind. Thanks for reading!

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That was areally good chapter. Can't wait to read the next one :)

Author's Response: Hey, thanks! It's been a while since I've heard feedback about this fic. Hope you enjoy it!

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Oh no! Why'd you abandon this? :( that's what I get for not being able to get on for so long :(:(:(:(

Author's Response: Wasn't feelin it...not really my style...idk. I might come back to it later, not really sure. Maybe I should put it back in wip...i just don't know.

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really really good!
keep writing!

Author's Response: I will, i've just started the next chapter. I can't say when it'll be out, but i'm doing my best!

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You shouldn't delete it. It's really good. This chapter was funny=) And don't worry about it. I think we all understand that the characters sometimes don't listen to the author ;) Some of the diolouge at the very beginning between the marauders got a bit repetitive but not as bad as some I've seen=) The story so far is good, though. Especially if it's your first marauders story. I would be interested to see how you write this. I can't wait to really see how you acquant the reader with the individual characters. Please let me know if you decide to continue and not delete the chapter. It really is rather good. If you'd like I could put a not at the end of my chapters and a couple of my friends stories. The three of us have more of a marauders era history/regular audience. I would love to help you continue this story anyway I can=)

Author's Response: u know, i think i will continue this. i re-submit it with a small change at the end, and maybe that'll do something. if u really could put a note at the end, that would help a TON. let's see...i'd give u my email, but i think the staff would kick me out for postin that for a review response...i'm already on the edge as it is. if u've got a way to communicate, let me kno. i'll have a chapter up sometime this week or the next one. thanks for your help!

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