7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by maraudertimes Violet's Secret

7th October 2013:
It looks good! Nice start and its very interesting!
That said, maybe you should just read over it to catch some minor spelling mistakes?
Also, add something to notify the reader that you've transitioned from one scenario to the next. It gets a little confusing.
But, I really liked it and I'm excited for when you put up the next ones!
MT

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Review #2, by maraudertimes Padfoot and Prongs

7th October 2013:
Hi!
Okay, so this is hilarious. I really liked this and I'm excited to go on to the next chapter.
That said, I don't know how, but some of your sentences are cut off and the rest are entered (I don't know how to explain it). It makes it a little hard to read.
Also, just me nit-picking, the invisibility cloak isn't supposed to be able to be accio'd. In the 7th book, a Death Eater tried to put it didn't work.
ANYWAYS, I really liked it.
Kudos!
MT

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Review #3, by Ginni Weasli Violet's Secret

25th January 2011:
This is a really good story, it's funny and it all comes together. Keep writing more chapters because i'm anxious to read more of it

Author's Response: I have off from school tomorrow...I'll probably start writing this fic again. It's been awhile...at least a year. I almost abandoned it, but you've changed my mind. Thanks for reading!

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Review #4, by Ginni Weasli Padfoot and Prongs

25th January 2011:
That was areally good chapter. Can't wait to read the next one :)

Author's Response: Hey, thanks! It's been a while since I've heard feedback about this fic. Hope you enjoy it!

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Review #5, by prongs13 Violet's Secret

20th March 2010:
Oh no! Why'd you abandon this? :( that's what I get for not being able to get on for so long :(:(:(:(

Author's Response: Wasn't feelin it...not really my style...idk. I might come back to it later, not really sure. Maybe I should put it back in wip...i just don't know.

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Review #6, by nina Padfoot and Prongs

6th October 2009:
really really good!
keep writing!

Author's Response: I will, i've just started the next chapter. I can't say when it'll be out, but i'm doing my best!

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Review #7, by prongs13 Padfoot and Prongs

4th October 2009:
You shouldn't delete it. It's really good. This chapter was funny=) And don't worry about it. I think we all understand that the characters sometimes don't listen to the author ;) Some of the diolouge at the very beginning between the marauders got a bit repetitive but not as bad as some I've seen=) The story so far is good, though. Especially if it's your first marauders story. I would be interested to see how you write this. I can't wait to really see how you acquant the reader with the individual characters. Please let me know if you decide to continue and not delete the chapter. It really is rather good. If you'd like I could put a not at the end of my chapters and a couple of my friends stories. The three of us have more of a marauders era history/regular audience. I would love to help you continue this story anyway I can=)

Author's Response: u know, i think i will continue this. i re-submit it with a small change at the end, and maybe that'll do something. if u really could put a note at the end, that would help a TON. let's see...i'd give u my email, but i think the staff would kick me out for postin that for a review response...i'm already on the edge as it is. if u've got a way to communicate, let me kno. i'll have a chapter up sometime this week or the next one. thanks for your help!

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