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Review #1, by Megannnn State of Delusion

28th September 2009:
that girl is a bitch.
damn good story though.

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Review #2, by collette michelle State of Delusion

27th September 2009:
Blimey, that was good! I loved the way you set it up between present and flashbacks.

It was eerie and creepy how far Dom would go for her little obsession with Teddy. That she would kill him so he couldn't be with her sister. She must have been so desperate to kill the father of her sister's unborn child.

I am sorry, I can't seem to make coherent thoughts. This left me speechless.

Excellent job!
10/10
xx.
Collette

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Review #3, by explosion State of Delusion

27th September 2009:
wow. really, really good. it was very welll written.

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