Omg i am literally crying right now! That was an amazing story and you are such a great writer! As much as i didn't want Sophie to leave hogwarts i absolutely loved the ending! Again... great story!

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i feel like kicking and screaming and crying my eyes out. why did Dom have to die? why.

so other than the ending which basically tore my heart out and threw it on the floor then got crushed by a tree then carved into pieces by a blunt butter knife i loved the story. it was a great idea that was original and you wrote it amazingly. don't stop being a writer. even if all you write is fan fiction. don't stop writing
10/10

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Wow. just, wow. Nothing else to say.

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Omg I almost cried and although I often feel really sad im pretty sure my tear glands don't work or something like that. So saying I almost cried is like saying I was bawling my eyes out!! I got so attatched to this story and then the end just... Wow! It truly was a beautiful fic - great ideas and amazing writing - i wish i could write a novel the way you do :)

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argh i cried like a little baby... very well done. loved it :) AUSSIE REPING!!

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Who is the Sirius on your banner??? Love the story!!! xx

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Wow... This was so amazing..
But you made me cry for the last two chapters!
I was already thinking she and Dom were in a coma and they would wake up eventually, but I always thought it was going to be like, they both wake up and tell each other they both had the same "dream", and then there would be this mystery like did it really happen?
But nooo! You made Dom die! :( It was so sad...
It was really beautiful how it all came together though, with Dom stop being her friend when she died.. When Soph realised that I was like "Yess so somethink magical did happen!" but then it turned out her mom told her..
Anyway, the story was amazing, you are amazing, and I think you did the right thing with it, not giving it a happy end! It's sad but it takes courage and most of the times makes the story more beautiful! :)

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HOLY MOTHER OF GOD, THIS HAS TO BE BY FAR THE BEST STORY I HAVE READ, I WAS CRYING AND LAUGHING, YOU SHOULD BE A WRITER!

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NO I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU NO NO NO! FUCKING NO!

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NO NO NO NO NO OH MERLIN PLEASE NO!

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Yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay!

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I freankin love that song! It is simply beautiful and it was a perfect way to end your story. I must admit, I did get a bit teary eyed at the end. But anyways, fabulous story!

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Oh god, im a bawling mess. I got so attached T_T I cried so hard! Why'd you make me cry!? T_T i know its not a happy happy ending, but u made it realistic and practical. Reality.

I cried so bad at this chapter. Oh god. I felt the pain in the lost and all. T_T

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Such a good story! Love the idea, made mr cry at the end though :( read it all in one day, great writing- only issue i spotted was in one of the first chapters you refer to 1970's as nineeenth century, its thE 20th :) cause now 2012 is the 21st century! Thankyou for writing! X

Author's Response: Thank you sooo much Beth! I'm glad you enjoyed it from the beginning to the end :) One of my fave stories that I've writen to date.

Uh, yes I noticed that wayy back haha! And I hadn't had the chance to fix it. I will eventually!

Thanks again for reading and reviewing! Much appreciated ^^

XOXO WildFlower!

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so i read this within a day! i must day this story is one of the best i've read! just the right amount of everything! it was a long journey for sophie and dom (R.I.P) and i felt like i was right there with them the whole time. awesome story, one i'll never forget reading! i'm glad i'm reading your other story because you are such an awesome writer!

this deserves more than a 10/10 rating! good job!

Author's Response: Awww, thanks so much for reading and reviewing both of my stories, especially this one as it was my first novel and practically my baby :) I'm so happy that you loved it and that you related with Sophie and Dom and enjoyed their journey right to the fateful end. Thanks so much for the compliments and for this wonderful review! I'm grinning ear to ear haha!

XOXO WildFlower!

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This was the most amazing fanfic that I have ever read. It made me laugh and cry. I loved it so much.

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! I'm so happy that you loved this from the beginning to the end! Thank you so much for taking your time to read this story and leave a lovely review!

XOXO WildFlower!

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Hi, this is really great story! Actually one of the best I have read, although it made me cry in the end. Keep on writing, I am looking forward to your other stories! :)

Author's Response: Omgsh! Thank you sooo much for this lovely review! It made me cry at the end too, because I couldn't believe I'd finished this. Thanks again for reading and reviewing and my new story should be up before you know it :) so keep an eye out!

XOXO WildFlower!

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;-; Dom died... *sobs*
too much emotions... Sirius, Dom, Sophia, etc...

Author's Response: She unfortunately did :( poor Dom, she was such a joy to write. So much emotions felt by every character in this story, this chapter was bittersweet, actually the whole story was bittersweet as the sad end was inevitable.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Much appreciated!

XOXO WildFlower!

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No it ended! NOOO! Have her go back to Hogwarts I a sequel!! I'm crying hysterically right now!

Author's Response: Yes it has ended! I'm still in shock that it's finished! Unfortunately there will not be a squeal, it just can't be done. Though I have thought about writing a 'after Lost in Magic' but I'm not sure. Anyway thank you so much for reading, reviewing and for your support, it's much appreciated!

XOXO WildFlower!

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God, I cried like a baby when I read the last 2 chapters... I was hoping by some chance it would be real, and she could stay in the magical world. :'( I'm depressed now.

AMAZING story, nonetheless.

Author's Response: I couldn't help but to shed a tear when I was in the middle of writing the second to last chapter, it seemed so surreal that it was near the end! But now it's definitely over, and I'm really going to miss writing!

I hope you don't stay depressed for long! The ending couldn't have gone any other way, though I wish it were real...*sniff*

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!!

XOXO WildFlower!

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I GUESSED RIGHT!
i did it, oh yeah, it did it, whooo!
opps!! sorry! i guess i'm to used to doing that with the proper dance routine.. for some reason, it annoys my brother.. i wonder why.. ;)
i loved the ending.. it was sad for the dom part (but i guessed THAT.. :D) but the part with scott and jamie made the ending seems promising...
it made me smile wide..
i hope she kicks jamie's butt at tekken...i used to play that as a kid but i usually chose that chinese girl.. she has nice moves if you know the right buttons.. :)
i'll miss this story and i hope you write another one soon..
i'll be on the look out!
Forever loyal,
fanna

Author's Response: You certainly did my dear! Hahaha! I'm the same with the 'in your face' situations with my younger sister, she does this little pout 'I lost' thing that always makes me laugh!

Definitely sad with Dom passing, but bringing in Scott and Jamie does seem promising doesn't it? Sophie will be on the road to recovery with them I'm sure :)

I think she might kick Jamie's butt at Tekken, the break dancing guy will spin him to a K.O. Oh yes, the chinese girl, I used to play with her and Nina, I reackon they were the best out of the girls.

I'm in the middle of writing another one, but I'm unsure when I'll get it up. But I hope you do read it when it's up! Keep a look out!

Thanks so much again for everything Fanna!

XOXO WildFlower!

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W.O.W

its bloody brilliant!! i love it :D you couldn't have had a more perfect ending !! :D sirius and james aka scott and jamie yayayayayayayayay !! but dom :'( man !! she was an amazing friend :D

wowowowow !! im gonna remember this story forever !!!

love-kiara :D

Author's Response: YAYYY! Thank you so much Kiara! I'm so happy that you loved it! Thanks so much for your support not only with me, but with Sophie and Dom :) And I hope you do remember this story forever haha!

XOXO WildFlower!

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Oh my goodness, that was so good. I had to hold back tears the whole time because I'm in a public area. As soon as I'm by myself I think I'll have a good cry. I'm so glad you had Sirius and James... er . . . Jamie and Scott come into her world! I would have been so upset if you didn't do that :( hahah, but you did so I'm beaming :D This story was one of the first stories I found all by myself on this website. Usually I got references from my sister, but not for this one! This is also the third story I have finished. Three is a good number!

Poor Dom and REGULUS! Gah, evil, made him die in her world too :( That's so SAD! I would have hated to have to go back to the normal world, like seriously, I want potions!! So much cooler than dingy old math. Ick.

You are my official idle now just because you finished a story on here. I haven't managed too do it yet, but I know I can! You came back after all that time off, which was SO amazing. I'm so glad you did!

I will most definitely be reading your other works! I'll get on that story you already wrote. Not now, but very soon!

Waaa, I don't want to stop this review because it is the last one and I don't want it to be to short.

Praise: You are an amazing author, amazing person because you answered enthusiastically to all my reviews (which also made me grin like a loon haha) and because you never gave up on this story!

Please let me know when you'll be posting this new story! Lily and James? Right? I think that's what you said. I want to read it!! I'll be checking your authors page every day!!!

I'll miss this story *sniff* LOVED IT ! :)

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WhatAboutRegulus

Author's Response: WhatAbout, little WhatAbout...what can I say to you.

THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU! For all your amazing reviews and your amazing support since day one. I absolutely can't explain how appreciative I am. You're amazing! I'm glad that I'm your lucky number three! YAYY!

I saved the day with Scott and Jamie, I'm glad they're a hit! I think if I hadn't brought them in, I think Sophie wouldn't have recovered, which would have just been awful. I know...Regulus, I'd made him die in Sophie's world also, so he could be with Dom ;) so it's sort of happy haha! Potions: 1 Maths: 0 tehe!

I really can't believe myself that this is over. It's a shock really haha! But I completed my second story on here so I am so happy!

I am writing another fic, and it's Marauders era, not Lily and James but another Sirius/OC but this is different to anything I've written before! And I can say that it's set in the Marauders 7th year, sooo James and Lily will be a big part! Hopefully I'll get it up soon, but I've been pretty busy again.

Thank you so much again, for everything WhatAbout, you're one of my originals so you're pretty damn special in my book :) That I have to give you a shout out in my next story!

XOXO WildFlower!

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this story was simply amazing. The way you portrayed Sirius, Lily, James and the other hp characters, it was just so real :') thank you for writing this (:

awww I can't believe that this story has ended and I'll always be a fan of Sirius and Sophie (: so once again, thank you thank you thank you. For writing such an incredible story, it was a fascinating read.

I hope I'll see more of your stories in the near future!
keep writing

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy you loved the way I portrayed the most important HP characters! It makes my day knowing I accomplished something that is really difficult!

Awww, I'm still surprised that I finished this, to be honest my stories always mean so much to me, so when they mean so much to someone else, it's such a good feeling! I'm happy you love the relationship between Sophie and Sirius! They are my biggest relationship written to date so thank you for appreciating them!

Thank you again for reading, reviewing and supporting this story! I have more stories already in line for the future, so keep an eyeout :)

XOXO WildFlower!

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OHMYGOD. OHMYGOD. OHMYGOD!


This was fantastic. I loved it. Cried a bit, because it was sad. I like the whole bit with Dom stopping being her friend at Hogwarts on the day she died, and I love her new neighbours!


well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Honestly! I'm glad that you loved the ending and how it all panned out. Also all your reviews and support right to this moment, it makes me so happy!

Thanks again blackangelwings!

XOXO WildFlower!

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