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Review #1, by Mandi The Art of Being Captain

1st February 2010:
Griffindor lose to Raven claw in Philosophers stone because Harry was in the hospital wing after saving the stone

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'll change that as soon as I can.

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Review #2, by uncivilized The Art of Being Captain

30th September 2009:
I liked the : "I'm pregnant." "Wood, we know." Funny :-) I liked your Oliver, a very believable characterization. I believe the reason that they lost the final game was because Harry was in unconscious in the hospital wing due to Quirrel/Voldemort.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the Harry bit. I was so confused. It would explain why there was no mention of the game, because the book is a narrative about Harry. I'm very glad Oliver was believabe. Thank you very much for reviewing! I appreciate it greatly.

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