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Review #1, by purplestars4life December 25, 1977

15th January 2010:
wow. that was good. it was interesting seeing into liz's mind. i like this interpretation of sirius. its different but at the same time still.. him. good work!
sorry but i caught one little grammar problem. your saying that as liz is walking to the room of requirement she's holding a blanket. here's what you have,
"Her arms laden with a large fleece blanket."
thats an incorrect sentence. there is no verb. you might have to change it to ,
"her arms were laden with a large fleece blanket."
sorry if what i said is wrong. im simply trying to help.
good job otherwise! i loved this!! it is excellent. its better than some fanfic with sirius. keep it up! cant wait for the next chapter!

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Review #2, by Kristina December 25, 1977

25th September 2009:
Loving it so far, hurry up and write the rest Leesh

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Review #3, by emilie hope December 25, 1977

23rd September 2009:
I like it so far! Keep up the great work!

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